deepundergroundpoetry.com
riptide
there's a crack in my mind where lucid me is leaking out
while everything seems normal now everything is in doubt
i don't know how to bridge the breach that's causing me to see
a crack too wide with a flow too strong to save a lucid me
while everything seems normal now everything is in doubt
i don't know how to bridge the breach that's causing me to see
a crack too wide with a flow too strong to save a lucid me
Written by
twitchnsway
(Twitch Sway)
Published 21st Mar 2017
| Edited 31st Dec 2020
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 7
reading list entries 0
comments 14
reads 1030
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re. riptide
21st Mar 2017 3:56am
it runs fiercely, like the flood
that breaks thru the fault in the dam...
that breaks thru the fault in the dam...
0
Re: Re. riptide
27th Mar 2017 3:13am
Re. riptide
21st Mar 2017 9:17am
The only way to survive such a crisis is to try n remain calm, n face it with determination n courage bro. N I wish you the all in life... stay strong!
0
Re: Re. riptide
27th Mar 2017 3:16am
It's not the first and it won't be the last. I feel like I friggin yoyo. Your advice means much brother. Thank you. 👍
Re. riptide
21st Mar 2017 11:59am
It's an intense feeling of desperation.... whenever we experience a loss of (self-)control...and you have creatively captured, and expressed this emotional state, my friend!
i am--and WILL be--a life-line....please know that you only have to reach out and take hold...(i won't let go)
Sending you the healing strength of Blue Lite's Energy. Please take care! xo
Sioch`ain leat
i am--and WILL be--a life-line....please know that you only have to reach out and take hold...(i won't let go)
Sending you the healing strength of Blue Lite's Energy. Please take care! xo
Sioch`ain leat
0
Re: Re. riptide
27th Mar 2017 3:20am
Thanks a bunch for the offer Enchantress. This one's about 3 weeks old. I decided a little ways back to not publish realtime 'issues'. While I appreciate the caring sentiment. I don't like worrying people. Life rolls on dear friend. As always. You are appreciated. xo
Re. riptide
21st Mar 2017 5:41pm
You know that I'm deeply impressed by your way of expressing yourself. You have a way with words. Only the tenor makes me sad. You've got PM, by the way.
Hugzzz, dear friend.
Hugzzz, dear friend.
0
Re: Re. riptide
27th Mar 2017 3:26am
Writing's the only time my thoughts become clear Ms Chi. Although with a dozen or so poems being written at the same time even my writes can take some time to clear up. I'm always grateful for your eyes and words lovely. You are appreciated. xo
Re. riptide
Anonymous
22nd Mar 2017 2:46am
Wow Twitch.....what an emotional ink......we all have cracks in our minds......what leaks we put in words......thought provoking ink....enjoyed.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
0
Re: Re. riptide
27th Mar 2017 3:34am
You're so right Flower. That's what I love about writing here. Strength and understanding amongst fellow poets is invaluable to me. Because poets tend to find the same avenues of expression. It's just the words that vary. Thank you Flower. As always you are appreciated girl. xo
Re. riptide
Anonymous
19th Jul 2017 2:34pm
<< post removed >>
Re: Re. riptide
6th Oct 2020 5:22pm
Re. riptide
10th Dec 2020 5:08pm
Re: Re. riptide
31st Dec 2020 2:02am