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My Teacher
Look into my eyes
Green tinted mirrors to my soul
Filled with passion
Longing to show you my all
All that they have seen
A past full of so much pain
My future so over flowing
You have shown me how things should be
I give you my trust
Respect you have earned, my Love
I give myself to you
Pleasure is ours to share
Your touch ignites me
I drift into ecstasy
Take all that I am
I am yours to seize
Take control
Show and teach your lil Belle
Share with me your secret desires
What truly pleases you Sir?
Green tinted mirrors to my soul
Filled with passion
Longing to show you my all
All that they have seen
A past full of so much pain
My future so over flowing
You have shown me how things should be
I give you my trust
Respect you have earned, my Love
I give myself to you
Pleasure is ours to share
Your touch ignites me
I drift into ecstasy
Take all that I am
I am yours to seize
Take control
Show and teach your lil Belle
Share with me your secret desires
What truly pleases you Sir?
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Re. My Teacher
Hmm, not bad but you don't really let on that they are your teacher and you're the student so maybe you should explain a little more about that,
That would be the turn on in this
That would be the turn on in this
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Re. My Teacher
I see your point. As I was writing all I could think about how he taught
me to love and trust in him. Not to mention how he has taught me to trust in my own feelings too. After reading your comment I will definitely take a moment and rethink the title. Thanks so much for your insight hun.
me to love and trust in him. Not to mention how he has taught me to trust in my own feelings too. After reading your comment I will definitely take a moment and rethink the title. Thanks so much for your insight hun.
Re: Re. My Teacher
24th Mar 2017 6:49pm
Re. My Teacher
20th Mar 2017 7:30am
private class. it's an escape from
the darkness & into a sexual light;
wonderful, Belle...
the darkness & into a sexual light;
wonderful, Belle...
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Re: Re. My Teacher
24th Mar 2017 6:50pm
So very true Mr. Feddeler. So happy that you enjoyed my lil write Sir.
Re. My Teacher
20th Mar 2017 9:27pm
A pleasure to read, sweet Belle. The past may have been painful but the future holds delights.
All that they have seen
A past full of so much pain
My future so over flowing
You have shown me how things should be
You're an honors student, no doubt about it...
All that they have seen
A past full of so much pain
My future so over flowing
You have shown me how things should be
You're an honors student, no doubt about it...
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Re: Re. My Teacher
24th Mar 2017 6:53pm
Honors student? Hmmmm, I have never asked to be graded but I definitely wouldn't complain about having to do extra credit work. Hahaha
Re. My Teacher
20th Mar 2017 10:10pm
Belle, you are passions teacher. Your courage amid pain is a lesson that teaches us all. Bravisima!
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Re: Re. My Teacher
24th Mar 2017 6:55pm
I truly believe that the pain in the past is what allows me to see how truly blessed I am today hun. I appreciate and savor everything in my life now.
Re. My Teacher
25th Mar 2017 3:47am
It's nice to read you again Belle. Welcome back! We learn from our pasts and are eager to see what the future holds for us!
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Re: Re. My Teacher
5th Jul 2017 8:05am