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I Submit
Though I first protest
It does no good
I'm yours to my core
I submit
Kneeling before you
Needing your touch
Needing your praise
I submit
Lost in the quiet
Lost in the dark
Crawling towards your voice
I submit
Following your commands
Never straying from your desires
Longing to please you
I submit
Bound by your ties
Branded by your palm
Daring to make no sound
I submit
Have I pleased you?
Are your darkest desires sated?
Have I been your good girl Sir?
I will ALWAYS submit
It does no good
I'm yours to my core
I submit
Kneeling before you
Needing your touch
Needing your praise
I submit
Lost in the quiet
Lost in the dark
Crawling towards your voice
I submit
Following your commands
Never straying from your desires
Longing to please you
I submit
Bound by your ties
Branded by your palm
Daring to make no sound
I submit
Have I pleased you?
Are your darkest desires sated?
Have I been your good girl Sir?
I will ALWAYS submit
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16th Mar 2017 5:53pm
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20th Mar 2017 1:50am
Re. I Submit
16th Mar 2017 7:07pm
Fun in submissions but make him work for such a state
Menfolk shouldn't get it all easy lol
I'm for making them work xD
Menfolk shouldn't get it all easy lol
I'm for making them work xD
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Re: Re. I Submit
20th Mar 2017 1:54am
You are so right. I promise he definitely put in the time and effort to earn my trust and respect. Without those I could never be as subservient. He spoils me in return I please him. That in itself gives me pleasure.
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20th Mar 2017 1:55am
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16th Mar 2017 11:38pm
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20th Mar 2017 1:56am
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17th Mar 2017 5:00am
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20th Mar 2017 1:59am
Thank you Mr. Feddeler. There is beauty in submitting to another. Honestly, don't we all submit to someone in one way or another everyday?
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18th Mar 2017 7:21pm
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20th Mar 2017 2:01am
It's always a thrill so see that you enjoy what I do hun. Nice to know I have been missed.
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20th Mar 2017 2:02am
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25th Jan 2018 2:43pm
It is he who should submit to your magic. You deserve to be worshipped. Beautiful piece Belle. Bravisima!
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