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The Sex Was Great
The sex was great, but what of now
You've moved on, off to another town
Leaving me to think about all the possibilities
Lost long ago along with La Nina
These frigid walls still bleed your name
And the lack of sleep craves me insane
Liquid love found only lying on the floor with the worm
When will I ever learn
Digging six feet deeper one day too late
Red rolls of silence alone the dying wait
You've moved on, off to another town
Leaving me to think about all the possibilities
Lost long ago along with La Nina
These frigid walls still bleed your name
And the lack of sleep craves me insane
Liquid love found only lying on the floor with the worm
When will I ever learn
Digging six feet deeper one day too late
Red rolls of silence alone the dying wait
Published 18th Mar 2017
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18th Mar 2017 1:05pm
Methinks there may have been something deeper than just sex here, Tim. But perhaps it's why your mind is trying to convince your heart there wasn't.
I felt the forlorne nature of a reminiscent loneliness deeply in this.
I felt the forlorne nature of a reminiscent loneliness deeply in this.
Anonymous
18th Mar 2017 3:55pm
"These frigid walls still bleed your name"
This line reads like the core of the piece. I agree with the above commenter, seems like more than sex is missed. Beautifully written
This line reads like the core of the piece. I agree with the above commenter, seems like more than sex is missed. Beautifully written
