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Hollow
Hollow the canyon speaks volumes
Singing out love songs
but only echoes
loving me back
Is that smile really for me
or another you see?
One last love song I'll sing
into a honey-dipped night
waiting for real answers
to emerge in the light.
Singing out love songs
but only echoes
loving me back
Is that smile really for me
or another you see?
One last love song I'll sing
into a honey-dipped night
waiting for real answers
to emerge in the light.
Published 18th Mar 2017
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18th Mar 2017 7:48pm
This was truly an incredible piece. Heart wrenching lines 'Is that smile really for me or another you see?' something i've wondered myself many times. Outstanding words, and a wonderful piece overall. Thanks for sharing.
18th Mar 2017 7:51pm
18th Mar 2017 8:44pm
Anonymous
18th Mar 2017 9:50pm
Empty echoes are the worst. Hopefully she's just climbing the canyon to reach you. Beautiful
18th Mar 2017 10:15pm
Anonymous
19th Mar 2017 3:20am
Damn do i know those kinda nights..thankfully they're few in between nowadays.
I love your versatility Tim, i know i'll find something new each time i visit your page.
I love your versatility Tim, i know i'll find something new each time i visit your page.
19th Mar 2017 3:42am
Thanks Vee...those nights are rough...I get inspired by many things...who knows what's next but I am reading a detective novel based out of LA so that might influence me.
19th Mar 2017 8:49am
Oh, how sad...but only echoes
loving me back ...I know the feeling, you go so deep into the soul!
loving me back ...I know the feeling, you go so deep into the soul!
19th Mar 2017 2:55pm
