Poetry & Art

Yesss, as long as they possibly can, they will cheat deaths' cold hand of fate!

Welcome Dear Friend! Yes, indeed they do, look at Rumi, wandering, mystifying the world well past his death so many centuries ago

Very short piece, but powerful! They have indeed cheated death, hopefully it will continue to do so. Great piece brother!:)




~anonshadow😏

Welcome My Brother The Pariah And Grey Shadow! ;-) I thank You for your deep insight and generous appreciation. Yes I hope as well it continues. Thanks once again bro! KDAmB

Perfectly true

Welcome My brother! Thank You so much for your insightful feedback. Cheers! KDAmB

BAM BAM BOOM, Birdman!!!!!


Because you have requested honest critique, I'd like to honor that and recommend losing"and" in L3.

welcome dear Sage One! :-) I welcome both You and your honouring of my work. Well losing the 'and' is no issue, am struggling to find a replacement, and it'll whack the Senryu. But I will work on your recommendation and soon you'll see the change! I am truly humbled by your advice and the RL add. Thank You sincerely. Kind Regards KDamB

*oh, my* ...

my goodness..such honour Lady Dev is truly humbling for this scribbler. My gratitude for your kindness. Thank You so very much dear friend. Kind regards KDAmB

I saw an epitaph on a grave once that simply stated "foolish enough to have been a poet". Maybe in cheating death, life was felt so much more deeply. Who knows.  

Simple thoughts here. Love these little snippets. Thank you.

Indeed...who knows. The epitaph indicated a true artist in my view. Welcome Dear Missy! I value your kind appreciation and your visit. I thank you sincerely for both. Glad you liked it. Cheers! KDamB

Amen to that - now we need convince everyone else :-)

Dave! you master of Wit! you've bettered this scribble a million times over- I wish i add your whole comment and make a collab poem right here!

just steal it - I am ok with that :p

too late- you've given permission there so I can't steal no more :-(

Ain't that the truth!
Nice little package of a gem you got here KD, full impactful and powerful :)

Welcome Dear Friend Rina! :-) awww you're too generous in your appreciation my friend!! Thank You!!! Cheers! KDAmB

Congratulations! This poem has been nominated for Deep Underground Poetry's Featured Poem of the Month Competition. You may view the nomination at the link below, and will be notified if selected.  

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9494/

Best of Luck and thank you for being a member of the Deep Side!

Glad but more than that Humbled to learn that dear Poetic Worm. Thanks Ahavati, the respected friend for this nomination!!   On the other hand---[evil smile] they say early bird gets the worm and it's 5AM here.... glad to see the worm! ((evil smiles))

bullseye!!!!

language of the immortals...

Welcome Dear Bro! Thank You So Much for your visit and generous appreciaiton!!! Cheers!

Congratulations! This poem has been nominated for Deep Underground Poetry's Featured Poem of the Month Competition. You may view the nomination at the link below, and will be notified if selected.  

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9621/30/#393759

Best of Luck and thank you for being a member of the Deep Side! Poet