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Tea
I like tea, I like milk.
I love cotton, I love silk.
Pokemon, Gameboy, DSi.
YouTube makes the world go by.
Hours of video on the screen.
I sit and watch and laugh and things.
It makes me happy, sometimes sad.
Angry, hyper, depressed-creepy-mad.
Internet, internet, computer screen.
I'm addicted, and get kind of mean.
I love it, I hate it, it confuses me.
And yes, this poem is short, Whoopee.
I love cotton, I love silk.
Pokemon, Gameboy, DSi.
YouTube makes the world go by.
Hours of video on the screen.
I sit and watch and laugh and things.
It makes me happy, sometimes sad.
Angry, hyper, depressed-creepy-mad.
Internet, internet, computer screen.
I'm addicted, and get kind of mean.
I love it, I hate it, it confuses me.
And yes, this poem is short, Whoopee.
Published 20th Aug 2011
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30th Nov 2011 8:15am
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9th Feb 2012 9:31pm
Not the most complex poem to figure out, though nothing wrong with a bit of light relief. "I sit and watch and laugh and things" not sure if you meant that line to be really funny cause of the way the rhyme stops awkwardly, but that's what I liked about it.
