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Home
indeed is where
the heart is
need not be big
need not be small
just a corner
where peace resides
anxiety
subsides
need not be
a place at all
it could be
someone's company
someone's heart
some place virtual
in short
a realm
where you truly
reside and live
© KDAmB 2017. All rights reserved.
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Re. Home
3rd Mar 2017 2:34am
And long to be free.
Succinctly put, Birdman. Nice to see you back in the roost. 🐦
Succinctly put, Birdman. Nice to see you back in the roost. 🐦
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Re: Re. Home
3rd Mar 2017 6:22am
Welcome dear Sage 'One'!! Thank you so much for the generous praise and welcome. Glad to be back in the roost from the roots. :-) Yes. Long to be free indeed. warm regards KDAmB
Re. Home
3rd Mar 2017 2:52am
Couldn't agree more with your poem. Word for word, you spelled it out loud and clear! Nice home run!!
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Re: Re. Home
3rd Mar 2017 6:24am
Welcome dear friend Cyndi! Thank You so much!! I welcome your presence and compliment from the heart. Glad it spoke to you!! Kind regards KDAmB
Re: Re. Home
3rd Mar 2017 6:25am
Welcome dear Sir Tim! glad I am to see you and see my scribble get appreciated by a poet like you! Thank You so much! KDAmB
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Anonymous
3rd Mar 2017 3:32am
Home can be the rain, the storm, the sun. Wherever you're alive. Nicely done.
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Re: Re. Home
3rd Mar 2017 6:28am
Welcome dear FTA firstly to DU and to my scribble. I thank you sincerely for the kind appreciation and visit. Yes, indeed it can be the rain, storm or the sun- where your heart truly lies and lives. Thank You once again! KDAmB
Re. Home
3rd Mar 2017 3:36am
"Home is where the heart is," has often been quoted . . . Like your poem relates to us, love is love wherever it is found . . . On the mean streets love can bloom, take my word about it. We stayed together for eight great years, until she finally died in my arms doing what she loved doing, snuggling with me and mainlining. We were lovers in love and I can still see her life slipping away, and her words, "Please don't be sorry."
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Re: Re. Home
3rd Mar 2017 6:34am
Jerry! my respected and dear Friend! I welcome you and your honor of sharing such close emotions with us. You have put it much better what I intended to convey. Both of you were home regardless of the location(s). Sad indeed I am to learn of loss of such an extent. She indeed was yours and yours home and you are her for she still resides there as it's apparent from your words Sir! If I combine all the compliments so far and put them in one set alongside yours that indeed will be a much better poem than I attempted here. For these explain better the term - home! Thank You so much Jerry!! warm regards KDAmB
Re. Home
3rd Mar 2017 6:17am
YES, just Yes! You've caputered in a few words what Home is all about...
Brilliant ink, my friend!
Brilliant ink, my friend!
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Re: Re. Home
3rd Mar 2017 6:36am
Welcome dear generous Friend Duende!! yes, truly you are indeed generous in your praise and affection my friend. I have not enough words to say Thank You properly! grateful I am for both your visit and kind appreciation my friend. kind regards KDAmB
Re. Home
3rd Mar 2017 8:04am
Re: Re. Home
3rd Mar 2017 1:46pm
Welcome my respected Friend JJ! Praise from you is praise indeed Sir! I welcome both your presence and kind appreciation sincerely. Thanks again JJ!! ☺ KDAmB
Re: Re. Home
3rd Mar 2017 1:48pm
Welcome dear bro Cheesa! ☺ You indeed humble me with your high praise my bro! I welcome your presence and steadfast support, both mean a lot to me. Thanks brother!! 🎉 KDAmB
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Anonymous
3rd Mar 2017 11:35pm
Welcome HOME ... KD
you were genuinely missed;)
~Devlin
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Re: Re. Home
3rd Mar 2017 11:50pm
Thank You Lady Dev!! ☺ So were you my friend. I did indeed miss all my near and dear friends whilst away. Thank You so much Dev! :-) Warm Regards KDAmB ☺ ☺ ☺
Re. Home
4th Mar 2017 9:40pm
Succinct KDAmB, I like it though if I may can I suggesting some tweaking...
3rd stanza, remove the 3rd line 'in the physical' as it seems superfluous
last stanza...last line could read 'live and reside' purely for flow...
3rd stanza, remove the 3rd line 'in the physical' as it seems superfluous
last stanza...last line could read 'live and reside' purely for flow...
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Re: Re. Home
4th Mar 2017 11:23pm
Welcome Dear Kate! ☺ Any honest advice like that is pure gold. I take it with open arms. Thank You my respected Friend!! ☺ Looks much better now!! ☺ Kind regards KDAmB
Re. Home
6th Mar 2017 1:31pm
My home is a computer screen I am always pleasantly pixelated when I am there. Real people and the real world have become alien to me - my home is in the hi-tech - I feel a poem coming on : Thank you :-)
excellent idea and words :-)
excellent idea and words :-)
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Re: Re. Home
11th Mar 2017 9:54am
Welcome Dear Friend Dave! you truly are a Mate! for me at DU! haven't forgotten your kindness and support during my early days here! I don't youse the word 'mate' lightly here. Your praise and kind appreciation has always meant a lot Dave! I thank You sincerely!! warm regards KDAmB
Re. Home
9th Mar 2017 8:30am
Re: Re. Home
11th Mar 2017 9:59am
Go raibh maith agat chara dearest!! :-) what a beautiful surprise! Welcome home too dear friend!! appreciate your visit and welcome!! Cheers! KDAmB