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One
Will
in walls
trapped by chambers
holding
autumn auburn eyes
were it just my skin you took
I'd surely die
letting myself slip away
these atoms owned
sinew, fibre
sewn
O core
the very bone
miats'yel
sway us
wherever One runs
i know each and every song
here today
there tomorrow
many roads mini-towns
Babe...
where i sleep
beneath
You
can hear
every gear...
working the circle
turning
You to me, I to You
come kismet
lets burn by every
licking flame
wonderment, height and whim
barefoot
rain
dipping toe
splash of puddle
reverie reigns
And I
captive
Written by
souladareatease
Published 25th Feb 2017
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Re: Re. One
25th Feb 2017 9:21pm
And as Always Dear Queen You Are far too kind!!! Thank You for the ego-boost!!!
Re. One
25th Feb 2017 11:09am
amazing read soul poet..the elements, and the fast flowing shape like interconnective flames of a kind of One. the you and i of one..esp. i loved the tone and the meaning when you say ,
" i know each and every song
here today
there tomorrow
many roads mini-towns"
Saw this in a comp thread. best to you. xx
" i know each and every song
here today
there tomorrow
many roads mini-towns"
Saw this in a comp thread. best to you. xx
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Re: Re. One
25th Feb 2017 9:25pm
Hey Uma :) Thank You for feeling the flow and Always for Your support!!! No matter how such things are Written-They are song :)
Re. One
25th Feb 2017 3:46pm
Re: Re. One
25th Feb 2017 9:27pm
slight of hand Van ;) I appreciate Your visit Good Sir-And Your kindness!!!
Re. One
Anonymous
25th Feb 2017 9:03pm
So much entangled within
a singular soul;
this has such depth
it is actually thought-provoking.
In awe.
~Devlin
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Re: Re. One
25th Feb 2017 9:29pm
Hey there Kidd-O!!! I'm Honoured You could feel the depth betwixt such simple lines-Thank You Mucho for such praise!!!
Re. One
Anonymous
25th Feb 2017 10:56pm
oh wow she sounds very special..i'm very happy for you mister Soul..:)
pefectly fitting for this month being Valentine.
pefectly fitting for this month being Valentine.
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Re: Re. One
25th Feb 2017 11:07pm
More than just special-You Know Her Well Beautiful!!! She IS Every wish Incarnate!!!
Re. One
3rd Mar 2017 6:09pm
I adore the flow and the tone!
As I read through its entirety,
my heart may have skipped a beat to catch up to the rest of me...
"Where I sleep
Beneath
You
Can hear
Every gear"
Thank you for this!
I'll tuck it away for later-days
on my reading list.
-All the best
As I read through its entirety,
my heart may have skipped a beat to catch up to the rest of me...
"Where I sleep
Beneath
You
Can hear
Every gear"
Thank you for this!
I'll tuck it away for later-days
on my reading list.
-All the best
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Re: Re. One
3rd Mar 2017 6:22pm
You are very Kind Preston-Thank Yo so much for the visit and RL -Honoured!!!
Re. One
12th May 2017 2:20pm
Congratulations! This poem has been nominated for Deep Underground Poetry's Featured Poem of the Month Competition. You may view the nomination at the link below, and will be notified if selected.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9621/30/#393759
Best of Luck and thank you for being a member of the Deep Side!
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/9621/30/#393759
Best of Luck and thank you for being a member of the Deep Side!
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