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This is not a metaphor.

Stalled,
the rusted engine
sputtering and spitting.

A translucent shape
dances out of the bonnet.

The clay-caked tyres
once black now brown,
squeal and vomit
as they spiral indefinitely
whilst sinking into their own holes.

A push from a single person,
the stubborn vehicle chuckles.

Maybe if we had more people
to push the car,
it would move forward
rather than permanently trenching itself.
Written by mute_harlequin (Mutequin)
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