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Muse (25th Sep 2016)
You can't leave, you can't go,
There's so many things about you that I am yet to know,
I can't say goodbye and I know I can't forget,
I'm just not finished writing about you yet.
Please stay, I need you so,
I love you and I'm feeling things I've never felt before,
I don't want to move on, I'll only have regret,
I don't want to stop writing about you yet.
Each day, you can be sure,
I wake up missing you even worse than the day before,
It breaks my heart and you can bet,
I've so much more to write about you yet.
It's true, my heart is sore,
I’ve found it broken often but to you I can't say no,
I can't give up, my mind is set,
I won’t give up writing about you yet.
There's so many things about you that I am yet to know,
I can't say goodbye and I know I can't forget,
I'm just not finished writing about you yet.
Please stay, I need you so,
I love you and I'm feeling things I've never felt before,
I don't want to move on, I'll only have regret,
I don't want to stop writing about you yet.
Each day, you can be sure,
I wake up missing you even worse than the day before,
It breaks my heart and you can bet,
I've so much more to write about you yet.
It's true, my heart is sore,
I’ve found it broken often but to you I can't say no,
I can't give up, my mind is set,
I won’t give up writing about you yet.
Written by
xsteff1991x
(Stephanie Simpson)
Published 10th Feb 2017
| Edited 22nd May 2017
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Re. Muse (25th Sep 2016)
10th Feb 2017 4:28pm
Re: Re. Muse (25th Sep 2016)
10th Feb 2017 4:58pm
Thank you, can you guess who it's about? 😂 ❤️ I just had to rewrite my comment because I hadn't clicked reply on your comment haha I'll get the hang of it eventually lol xx
Re. Muse (25th Sep 2016)
10th Feb 2017 4:50pm
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10th Feb 2017 4:56pm
Re. Muse (25th Sep 2016)
10th Feb 2017 7:53pm
Re: Re. Muse (25th Sep 2016)
10th Feb 2017 9:18pm
Oh thank you very much 😊 I definitely intend to post more, so hopefully I will not disappoint! X
Re. Muse (25th Sep 2016)
As a man used to writing poems inspired by and about women I like, interesting to see one by a woman writing about a man (so it appears), with whom admiration appears to be graduating to love....or is it about the baby sharing your picture? - it could equally apply.
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Re: Re. Muse (25th Sep 2016)
10th Feb 2017 9:38pm
Yes, it was about a man! How sad it would be if it was about a child, heartbreaking even. But no, your first assumption was correct. The poem is about my partner. Admiration is definitely correct but I wasn't falling in love, I was already very in love and afraid to lose him at the time. I often write about him. Thank you so much for your comment! 😊
Re. Muse (25th Sep 2016)
Anonymous
10th Feb 2017 10:09pm
This poem would make a good song with the right melody.
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Re: Re. Muse (25th Sep 2016)
10th Feb 2017 10:45pm
Re. Muse (25th Sep 2016)
11th Feb 2017 1:22am
I also love this one I can see your emotionally tied to that person I know that feeling well 😊
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Re: Re. Muse (25th Sep 2016)
11th Feb 2017 9:22am
Re. Muse (25th Sep 2016)
Come back to us please Stephanie. Loving the cleavage but that's not all! ;-)
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