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fuchsia blooms suckle (tanka)
fuchsia blooms suckle
scenic whiffs on sultry wind
in cloud-filled dreams still
shaken with a poignant sting
trapped in seaside's rustic pine
scenic whiffs on sultry wind
in cloud-filled dreams still
shaken with a poignant sting
trapped in seaside's rustic pine
Published 8th Feb 2017
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Anonymous
8th Feb 2017 5:03pm
Yes!! Very glad you published, this beauty needs to be shared and appreciated by all who know the intricate craftsmanship of a tanka and disciplined writing with economy of words and lines. Very impressive, straight in my RL.
8th Feb 2017 5:07pm
Anonymous
8th Feb 2017 5:10pm
Beautiful imagery which awakens the senses.
Clever and impressive ink, my friend.
Clever and impressive ink, my friend.
8th Feb 2017 5:14pm
8th Feb 2017 5:40pm
I fall in love with this style so much, they are addictive -This was perfect delivery Tim -Bravo Good Sir!!!
8th Feb 2017 5:54pm
I do love the economy of words...let me go check out some of yours...thank you Soul
9th Feb 2017 1:34am
I love this... reminds me of days I spent on an island as a child .. I could smell it again reading your words ...
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