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Mother
Standing still I feel so free
caught inbetween who I am
and who I want to be
Study your waves
how you move your majesty
My mind ponders
thoughts of we
How are you?
I'll say out loud
but no one can hear me
How are you?
Mother, mother
don't you miss me
How are you?
I've been good
as of lately
But standing still I feel so free
caught inbetween who I was
and who I ought to be
Sending me signs
through these shapes of mystery
My mind ponders
thoughts of we
how are you?
..I love you
caught inbetween who I am
and who I want to be
Study your waves
how you move your majesty
My mind ponders
thoughts of we
How are you?
I'll say out loud
but no one can hear me
How are you?
Mother, mother
don't you miss me
How are you?
I've been good
as of lately
But standing still I feel so free
caught inbetween who I was
and who I ought to be
Sending me signs
through these shapes of mystery
My mind ponders
thoughts of we
how are you?
..I love you
Published 7th Feb 2017
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7th Feb 2017 2:07pm
I get jealous when I read poems like this - my mother was a slug :-(
a beautiful poem :-)
a beautiful poem :-)
7th Feb 2017 3:45pm
So is mine, but I still care about her immensely. I really dont know why. Although when I wrote this I felt like I was talking to the whole world. I get stuck in my feelings alot lol. But I'm glad you liked it!(:
8th Feb 2017 7:07pm
nothing wring with getting stuck inside you're feelings - I have found it makes you write better poetry :-)
