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Last Love Letter
she wrote to him,
until the ink ran dry
she needed to give herself closure
no matter how hard
she couldn't read the pages
her eyes became blurred
she folded them together
without a thought or word
letting her tongue glide
along the edge
she locked the note
inside an envelope
she wrote his name
on the outside
to send it to the stars,
she lit it on fire and
watched it drift afar
until the ink ran dry
she needed to give herself closure
no matter how hard
she couldn't read the pages
her eyes became blurred
she folded them together
without a thought or word
letting her tongue glide
along the edge
she locked the note
inside an envelope
she wrote his name
on the outside
to send it to the stars,
she lit it on fire and
watched it drift afar
Published 5th Feb 2017
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5th Feb 2017 00:20am
Hopes, dreams, and words rise with the smoke and are always received. It's what makes the stars shine. This was heart-tugging, Je.
6th Feb 2017 3:01am
Thank You so much Ahavati for the read and thoughtful comments ... always appreciated For the add to your RL I am deeply humbled and honored by the gesture ... xx
5th Feb 2017 00:24am
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6th Feb 2017 3:03am
Thank You SweetOblivion.. sadly that is true ... trying to find peace in the process ...
Anonymous
7th Feb 2017 6:13am
This one brought tears.
So very moving.
A keeper for me.
So very moving.
A keeper for me.
8th Feb 2017 10:52pm
Thank You so much DeeplyRootedWords for such thoughtful comments and for the add to your RL .. humbled and honored by the gesture ox
12th Feb 2017 7:28am
Fire is such a powerful tool if you need closure and healing...
Painful and at the same time powerful poem!
Painful and at the same time powerful poem!
20th Feb 2017 4:56pm
Thank You so much Duende for the read and thoughtful comments .. much appreciated
2nd Mar 2017 7:53pm
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Best of Luck and thank you for being a member of the Deep Side!
2nd Mar 2017 9:05pm
2nd Mar 2017 8:44pm
Jemac, You have painted so well this scene. I love the idea of writing the letter as a cathartic exercise only to set it ablaze. As if your words could somehow reassemble, Phoenix-like, in his presence.
That's why I am a poet so that I can say the things I should or could have said and to express express emotions I should or could have felt. Also to exercise my demons.
Bravisima!
That's why I am a poet so that I can say the things I should or could have said and to express express emotions I should or could have felt. Also to exercise my demons.
Bravisima!
Thank You so much Gahddess for the read and thoughtful comments... greatly appreciated
