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ACHE
Normality has drowned me with boredom,
indifferent in my days.
The amazing taste of something unexpected,
soaks sweet desire on my palate, now infected.
Want is like a burning fire inside me,
raging to breath and to escape.
Oh to clutch just a piece,
has imprisoned me and leaves a stabbing ache.
Routine now clear in my rear view,
bittersweet with something new.
I am assured I will extinguish this desire,
patiently carress and embrace it tight.
I am effortlessly guided,
by euphoric sensations, no way to plunder.
Intoxicating pleasure overflowing throughout,
pacifying my craving, without one doubt.
My prize I will absolutely savor,
for a day...or two...or more.
indifferent in my days.
The amazing taste of something unexpected,
soaks sweet desire on my palate, now infected.
Want is like a burning fire inside me,
raging to breath and to escape.
Oh to clutch just a piece,
has imprisoned me and leaves a stabbing ache.
Routine now clear in my rear view,
bittersweet with something new.
I am assured I will extinguish this desire,
patiently carress and embrace it tight.
I am effortlessly guided,
by euphoric sensations, no way to plunder.
Intoxicating pleasure overflowing throughout,
pacifying my craving, without one doubt.
My prize I will absolutely savor,
for a day...or two...or more.
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Anonymous
- Edited 16th Aug 2011 00:22am
15th Aug 2011 10:58pm
you amaze me sis,great job!
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Anonymous
16th Aug 2011 2:43am
Sounds like you know what you want and you go after it. Reading this was like riding the jet stream through clouds of rhyme. Nicely done.
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16th Aug 2011 5:29am
I luv it
Anonymous
16th Aug 2011 3:43am
Reading this makes me feel the way I do when listening to Constant Craving. Very nice!
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re: I luv it
16th Aug 2011 5:30am
Routine now clear in my rear view
Anonymous
16th Aug 2011 11:54pm
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re: Routine now clear in my rear view
17th Aug 2011 5:45am
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17th Aug 2011 5:45am
Still my favorite
28th Sep 2011 7:10pm
Methodical and rhythmic. "effortlessly guided by euphoric sensations" your diction is something else in this one. Very well done
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re: Still my favorite
wow!
Anonymous
24th Nov 2011 3:25am
enjoyed
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Amazing!!!
13th Dec 2011 00:05am
Like looking at myself in the mirror.... You described my life... Great write!!!! Me like a lot!!!
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re: Amazing!!!
13th Dec 2011 00:27am
We need that little escape don't we ;) Thank you for the great comment!
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9th Feb 2012 6:46am
Wow, that was probably one of the better poems I've read on here. I really like the way this poem flows and the way your words flow so well. Keep up the great work!
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9th Feb 2012 4:26pm