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Industry of decadence
Words become a composition en masse
when sung from the soul of a gifted poet.
I immerse myself in a beautifully tragic love poem
and my body sways in harmony with the dulcet melody.
His desire dwells within a forbidden place
where tears are born of craquelure elegance,
transformed into priceless jewels to adorn the cheek
of a recherché woman. He calls them exquisite.
Our silver tongues dance to a libretto of lovers,
a tribal cadence that embodies the ferine rhythms
of passion and lust. I come to him in need,
I cling to his perdition as it builds into the perfect storm.
We taste the flames of anguish as it feeds
our rapacious hunger and those hands, those lips,
the things he does to me.....
I swallow his savage demand; I savor the pain.
The way he loves me and the way he fucks me is suffering
and I do suffer for him.
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Re. Industry of decadence
1st Feb 2017 6:58am
sensual in your silver tongue, Kas;
a woman knows that suffering,
but a man brings it as a gift...
a woman knows that suffering,
but a man brings it as a gift...
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Re: Re. Industry of decadence
1st Feb 2017 7:49am
So beautiful John, and yes, A man's pain is a woman's treasure; she keeps it close to her heart...
Re. Industry of decadence
1st Feb 2017 3:43pm
"I cling to his perdition as it builds into the perfect storm."
I feel the longing and deep desire and the ending it so perfect we do suffer for those we love or lust after..
love Crim
I feel the longing and deep desire and the ending it so perfect we do suffer for those we love or lust after..
love Crim
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Re: Re. Industry of decadence
2nd Feb 2017 6:45am
We do indeed suffer for those we love, and are completely willing to bear the weight of it. Thanks for coming to see me, Crim...
Re. Industry of decadence
1st Feb 2017 10:55pm
Love the film noir evocation. The title speaks for that side of the film industry.
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Re: Re. Industry of decadence
2nd Feb 2017 8:26pm
Picture looks it could be from an early version of 'The Postman Only Knocks Twice', as it reminds me of scenes in the 80s movie between Jack Nicholson and Jessica Lange involving a kitchen table..
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Re. Industry of decadence
Anonymous
1st Feb 2017 11:42pm
Kasai..........gooooood lawwwwwwd.....we will suffer hell for their pain as we make it our own...it shows the love each has for the other...them willing to gift and share it and us willing to own it as well...beautiful and poignant as always...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. Industry of decadence
2nd Feb 2017 7:49am
Ah yes, a woman definately does just that, maybe it's what makes love so meaninful, the sacrifices we are willing to make. I like the way you worded that, to own the gift of another's pain is quite a beautiful thing. Thank you for sharing, sweet Taryn...
Re. Industry of decadence
I hate to confess this but ughh, something
on me list is gonna scoot-ova lol..
f'ing saints.. .lips sewn by aches
I'm in love again ;) I am adoring this piece
my Ink Mistress, with every thread of my
own sufferance and body
-Howlings
on me list is gonna scoot-ova lol..
f'ing saints.. .lips sewn by aches
I'm in love again ;) I am adoring this piece
my Ink Mistress, with every thread of my
own sufferance and body
-Howlings
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Re: Re. Industry of decadence
2nd Feb 2017 8:07am
Oh how you flatter me, kind lady, and such lovely words you leave me with. Just love your visits, Howlings, always a pleasure...
Re. Industry of decadence
2nd Feb 2017 7:48am
"Our silver tongues dance to a libretto of lovers" > such a beautiful line!
I love the references to music in this piec...
Some of us are born to suffer, but it makes us feel alive (my thoughts)
Amazing write, dear Kasai
I love the references to music in this piec...
Some of us are born to suffer, but it makes us feel alive (my thoughts)
Amazing write, dear Kasai
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Re: Re. Industry of decadence
2nd Feb 2017 8:15am
Music, poetry, art, all so very beautiful. I just love weaving them all together. And yes, even that suffering is beautiful in that it lets us know we are still living. I agree, some of us are born to suffer, perhaps it makes us stronger. Thank you for the wonderful visit, Duende...
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2nd Feb 2017 11:28am
Re. Industry of decadence
3rd Feb 2017 4:40am
Kasai. I love the sensuality, climax and build up. Such a wonderfully written piece. It sways and dances. Captivating and got me intrigued.
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Re: Re. Industry of decadence
3rd Feb 2017 9:59am
So great you came to visit me, eswaller and thank you for the kind words. I'm so glad you enjoyed...