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M's "Crazy Love"
“ If only you knew how much I do
I do love you
If only you knew how much I do
I do need you.....”
….and sometimes it's very hard
for me to discern
through love's lessons learned
whether it's like candy
“Punch and Judy ” sweet
a delectable grape and lemon treat
that's just edgy enough
to tantalize and stimulate
the inner me
to the “Nth” degree
My fascination of all that is you
Then again,
maybe it's the words
in this song,
“Do me right, do me wrong...”
It's the kindness in your eyes
navigating the melancholy,
in those moments
that I realize
just for me
“It's been you all the time”
[font=Times New Roman]“I dreamed of moments we share but you're not there
I'm living in a fantasy
'Cause you don't even suspect, could probably care less
about the changes I've been going through...”
….if only you really knew
how much I do love you...
...with no expectations
of reciprocity,
no deposit-no return
and you can't do nothing
about the way I feel
it's my fate and it's well earned
“ ain't saying I'm wrong
ain't saying I'm right
I'm in love with you and
I'm gonna' love you for life....”
[font=Times New Roman](…..if only you knew the way I feel about you)
( excerpts from "If Only You Knew" written by CARL TERRELL MITCHELL, SYLEENA JOHNSON, ANTHONY ROUND, DENNIS ROUND, DARNELL SMITH, KETARA WYATT for Patti Labelle)
Published 24th Jan 2017
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24th Jan 2017 11:34pm
Breathtaking beautiful MusicallyMrM I hope she gets to read this poem whoever she is I'm sure she would love to know :)
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25th Jan 2017 3:31am
25th Jan 2017 9:22am
My dear Archie, love is a beautiful thing....and so is this piece. She is blessed to have earned your heart.
"...with no expectations
of reciprocity,
no deposit-no return"
The most selfless and sincere way to love someone. Way to put your heart in an ink love. 💋
"...with no expectations
of reciprocity,
no deposit-no return"
The most selfless and sincere way to love someone. Way to put your heart in an ink love. 💋
25th Jan 2017 12:05pm
Written from such a musical point of view,
it covers all the senses.
If only she knew; very beautiful...
it covers all the senses.
If only she knew; very beautiful...
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