The Fear In The Fade

You Are correct Dear Mae!!! We are at times our own worst enemy . Thanks for stopping by- and reading me😘

You're on a roll lately, another deep dark twisted write.  
You tell me you just spew **** but i know better, musings inspirations...or smokin' somethinsomethin..but whatever it is, its fkn good i tellya ;)

Spat out Darl'n - that's what the quote said to me....in about 15 mins. If I took my time....I could've should've smoothed some edges- too late now lol  But I'm tickled You like it :)


See the sing-song play up there...that's quick writing

so that's what happens when i'm out'n bout running around town lol

I gotta do something to pass the slow ticking clock

deep atmosphere in this
the mist on the moor
where the wolf sings...

Thank You for visting John- "Werewolf~there wolf" -Y.Frankenstein

The imagery is beautiful, creating an image of night-time wonderland tinged with danger. The last line ties the story together beautifully. The sorrowful contemplation of night...

Hey there DK thanks for coming by- I Greatly Appreciate the kindness ....night time is the right time!!!

dear Soul so beautifully dark and full of dusk magic..

love Crim

There She is The Queen of Darkened Night!!! Appreciate Your Kindness Awlays Dear Crim!!!

Souls,
they tend to wield a knife.
Perhaps it is something
we're trying to sever,
permanently,
from ourselves?

an Excellent & Darkened observation
as well as interpretation..
~Devlin

Hey there Cool Kid!!! Indeed You're correct- I respect myself- to be sure- but in next breath- I'm ready to disembowel. Curse of the Gemini ;)

Gabe, my brother. I believe you knocked my poem out of the comp. Good luck!

Frank it's Always an Honour when You drop by the 'ol pad!!! I was much too late to the comp...and too stupid to notice for awhile- till I went back a second time to hairy eye. An Excellent post You served up there as well!!! Always a Great magic to the dark side!!! I hope Your getting well Brother- I worry about You!!!

AHHhhh.....Eventide...Twilight...the soothing...serene....enticing....healing...haunting.....bewitching...beautiful interval between the Lite and the Darkness--welcomed and dreaded by so many....

My friend, your striking, vivid imagery captures the darker, more dreaded aspects of this time....as viewed perfectly through the eyes of someone who fears the inevitable nite-fall...and the Darkness--perhaps both externally, and internally.

I think Stephen King himself would take note of this piece....and the poetic irony of the quote that you used for inspiration! It is from "The Running Man"....and i couldn't help but wonder if the poet/narrator believes we should be more afraid of ourselves....and running away more, from the Darkness within....

Thank you for sharing your Darker side with us!  

As Always DE You Are Quite Astute!!! Forever self analyzing- as that saying goes- "I am my own worst critic" Sometimes even in quick-spit I get the need to shake the shit Outtah myself and slap the face a few ;) My Dear Poetess - You need to post more- such a graceful Pen You Wield- fine wines Are savoured- but I drink it regularly ;) Be good to Yourself!!!

Numero24 (Who is #1?) Appreciate the comment RL and follow my good man!!! I will be popping by to hang out at Your pad soon!!!

Soul, the haunting imagery in this piece is vivid and felt as if I am there experiencing the terror of such a nightfall. I also recalled images from "The Hound Of The Baskervilles." And the ageless question is compelling and fraught with endless speculation. Bravo!

 "The Hound Of The Baskervilles." Thats a look under the hood Hooligan ;) Appreciate Your Kindness and time

We slice the dusk that dawn be born. Beautiful imagery, Soul. It's a wondrous thing when the sun lights the crowns of trees.

It is Wondrous AV!!! Fall brings it best-Give me evening and another morning and i revel!!! Appreciate You AV!!!

It is such a mysterious one because somedays you feel like you are the one that wields the knife and suddenly within a flash you are not!! Its a whirlwind

Ahhhh so true-Life is that journey to understand and be understood, the self, others, actions, reactions and the weight of it all. Thank You for Your visit and Kindness!!!