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Stowaway
Eventide holds my gypsy soul captive
with a promise of velvet obscurity.
My restless spirit cries out, for I seek
that which cannot be. A fallow garden
lies before my unadorned feet and in my fatuity,
hopelessness seeps through my soles.
My lament is swept into an easterly wind
'neath the wailing song of coyote
where my despondent tears
become rapture of innamorato.
I am a woman of shadow,
impassioned catastrophe, stowaway
in the blue heart of my soldier.
Hope lies quiescent within a shallow grave
and a weeping threnody is
my only offering. Perhaps one day
it will flourish as my saliferous cantata
has long been forgotten.
with a promise of velvet obscurity.
My restless spirit cries out, for I seek
that which cannot be. A fallow garden
lies before my unadorned feet and in my fatuity,
hopelessness seeps through my soles.
My lament is swept into an easterly wind
'neath the wailing song of coyote
where my despondent tears
become rapture of innamorato.
I am a woman of shadow,
impassioned catastrophe, stowaway
in the blue heart of my soldier.
Hope lies quiescent within a shallow grave
and a weeping threnody is
my only offering. Perhaps one day
it will flourish as my saliferous cantata
has long been forgotten.
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Re. Stowaway
14th Jan 2017 1:40pm
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14th Jan 2017 2:35pm
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14th Jan 2017 1:52pm
sometimes a poem weeps so much
it comes out as threnody;
you are embraced, Kas, in your shadows...
it comes out as threnody;
you are embraced, Kas, in your shadows...
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14th Jan 2017 2:17pm
Beautiful, John, thank you for such lovely words. It means
a lot, coming from you.
Maybe some of us were meant to
thrive in the shadows where beautiful
things are hidden...
a lot, coming from you.
Maybe some of us were meant to
thrive in the shadows where beautiful
things are hidden...
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14th Jan 2017 3:05pm
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14th Jan 2017 9:54pm
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14th Jan 2017 3:56pm
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14th Jan 2017 9:57pm
So sweet of you, Duende, your kind words truly appreciated.
Thanks for sharing them with me...
Thanks for sharing them with me...
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Anonymous
15th Jan 2017 3:19am
Oh my kasai....this aches...and grips my heartbeats...I needed to remind to take a breath....
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
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15th Jan 2017 4:45am
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15th Jan 2017 4:07am
You kinda stunned me with words I can't recall ever hearing, BUT what I did hear loud n clear, is an achin soul, that sadly felt like my own...
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15th Jan 2017 4:47am
Seems to be a lot of us around here,
thanks for stopping in to share a kind word...
thanks for stopping in to share a kind word...
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Anonymous
15th Jan 2017 4:56am
Such a blend of roller coaster emotions
this piece entails.
Hard to decide
what has touched my heart,
and which touched my soul?
I guess your poetry just does that.
Duly impressed.
~xo, Devlin
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15th Jan 2017 7:39am
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15th Jan 2017 10:35am
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15th Jan 2017 11:16am
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15th Jan 2017 12:33pm
just figured this reading list thing out and I won't think twice about spamming you with it, all your poems are super coolio :-)
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16th Jan 2017 3:22am
Super coolio - so great.
Nice to see new faces, antlers and all. Flattered to make your
RL (reading list) and I thank you for the visit...
Nice to see new faces, antlers and all. Flattered to make your
RL (reading list) and I thank you for the visit...
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16th Jan 2017 3:24am
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I like how the first two paragraphs are a mystery but then the word ' soldier ' becomes a clue that reveals and unfurls ( like a flag ) meaning and gives clarity to the last one..... Hope that makes sense....
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16th Jan 2017 3:28am
Makes alot of sense, PR, it seems you've solved some of the mystery. I was impressed that you've so clearly saw the meaning.
Always a pleasure to see your kind words...
Always a pleasure to see your kind words...
Re. Stowaway
15th Jan 2017 7:11pm
Hope lies quiescent within a shallow grave (Spectacular! I mean, wow. This line gave me chills. I think, perhaps, we differ slightly here, because I put my hope in the grave and threw dirt on it. I feel much more peaceful now)
The best poems are the ones that cast a strong feeling of emotion over the reader! And you've done just that!
Superlative work!
The best poems are the ones that cast a strong feeling of emotion over the reader! And you've done just that!
Superlative work!
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16th Jan 2017 3:31am
A shallow grave where hope lies dormant, just waiting to be cultivated.
Even after I bury it, still it lingers just below the surface.
Thanks so much for the visit and thoughtful words....
Even after I bury it, still it lingers just below the surface.
Thanks so much for the visit and thoughtful words....