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Standing there
Ide give you my time but I'm afraid you'd waste it
Bleed me dry of every minute
Play you're games and mince my words
What you hear is not what I heard
Lead me down the garden path
Not everything comes clean in the bath
Ide give you my heart but you'd only break it
Cast it aside and forsake it
Leave me praying without a prayer
Leave me naked standing there
Bleed me dry of every minute
Play you're games and mince my words
What you hear is not what I heard
Lead me down the garden path
Not everything comes clean in the bath
Ide give you my heart but you'd only break it
Cast it aside and forsake it
Leave me praying without a prayer
Leave me naked standing there
Published 13th Jan 2017
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13th Jan 2017 9:23am
Loving the fear and vulnerability that pours from this poem Cheesa. Sad truth is we do have to protect ourselves from such negative people who try to steer us from our positive path.
I always feel better after a good soak but it's very short lived our sins soon come back to haunt us
Great write thoroughly enjoyed the read!
FC
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I always feel better after a good soak but it's very short lived our sins soon come back to haunt us
Great write thoroughly enjoyed the read!
FC
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13th Jan 2017 3:31pm
Thank u for ure comments. I think to live positive life we need to be round positive people who bring out our best
13th Jan 2017 4:59pm
Yes exactly I've only recently came to realise that myself it's only taken 27 years 😂and you're very welcome love reading your writes!
FC
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FC
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13th Jan 2017 11:33am
Such a strong and at the same time painful read...
You got some amazing phrasing going on in this one, I especially liked:
"What you hear is not what I heard" and "Leave me praying without a prayer"
Outstanding last line... great write, Cheesa
You got some amazing phrasing going on in this one, I especially liked:
"What you hear is not what I heard" and "Leave me praying without a prayer"
Outstanding last line... great write, Cheesa
13th Jan 2017 3:50pm
14th Jan 2017 1:53am
what I love about your works my brother is the natural, unforced flow, said it many time before but it is what I love and it is what I love about this gem which delivers such emotions and feelings with such beauty!! fan? I am, yes! :-)
14th Jan 2017 6:58am
And I'm a fan to u and forever grateful of ure kind words thanks Bro means a lot
