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Meant To Be
resting in bed with my lover
she snuggles up against me
speaking with a small voice
“don’t ever leave me”
so I say
“I thought I told you before
now listen close
you are the love of my life
my only reason for being
the boat that sails me to safety
when I’m lost at sea”
as the night continues on
she places her head
in the pit of my chest
asking me through a yawn
“what of those who try to harm?”
so I reply
“I thought I told you before
now listen close
I’ll always be your superman
no matter how far you are
call my name, and I’ll be there
standing tall
with the strength of ten men”
her words start to muffle
as she begins to drift off
asking me one last thing
before entering dream land
“what if one of us leaves this world?”
believing my words
weren’t even heard
still I say
“I thought I told you before
now listen close
you're the voice that speaks
when no one else is there
that will always stay true
until we meet in the great beyond
because somethings
they are just meant to be”
she snuggles up against me
speaking with a small voice
“don’t ever leave me”
so I say
“I thought I told you before
now listen close
you are the love of my life
my only reason for being
the boat that sails me to safety
when I’m lost at sea”
as the night continues on
she places her head
in the pit of my chest
asking me through a yawn
“what of those who try to harm?”
so I reply
“I thought I told you before
now listen close
I’ll always be your superman
no matter how far you are
call my name, and I’ll be there
standing tall
with the strength of ten men”
her words start to muffle
as she begins to drift off
asking me one last thing
before entering dream land
“what if one of us leaves this world?”
believing my words
weren’t even heard
still I say
“I thought I told you before
now listen close
you're the voice that speaks
when no one else is there
that will always stay true
until we meet in the great beyond
because somethings
they are just meant to be”
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Re. Meant To Be
10th Jan 2017 10:04am
This is a truly beautiful special write I got so emotional reading this, so very touching!
This is how insecurities are dealt with! Perfect example of a strong loving man! This is the kind of love we all yearn for! Unfortunately I haven't had the pleasure of feeling that soothed and content from anyone rather the opposite actually 🙁 So for now I'm just going to start by trying to love myself.
FC
💜
This is how insecurities are dealt with! Perfect example of a strong loving man! This is the kind of love we all yearn for! Unfortunately I haven't had the pleasure of feeling that soothed and content from anyone rather the opposite actually 🙁 So for now I'm just going to start by trying to love myself.
FC
💜
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Re: Re. Meant To Be
11th Jan 2017 7:19am
It's so sad that a lot of women say they don't get this. I do understand though. It's not easy to go through life with a person. Sometimes it's even better to leave.
I have grown to appreciate my relationship. I have seen so many bad that I know when you have a good one, she's a keeper 😁
A thing I always told myself is that I can't hope to love others without loving myself first 🙂
Thanks for enjoying 😁
I have grown to appreciate my relationship. I have seen so many bad that I know when you have a good one, she's a keeper 😁
A thing I always told myself is that I can't hope to love others without loving myself first 🙂
Thanks for enjoying 😁
Re. Meant To Be
10th Jan 2017 11:12am
I've never in my experience such
a thing or anything close to.
But as usual your words makes
it palpable enough to experience
through you... when you write
in this regarding nature.
very beautiful
a thing or anything close to.
But as usual your words makes
it palpable enough to experience
through you... when you write
in this regarding nature.
very beautiful
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Re: Re. Meant To Be
11th Jan 2017 7:27am
You need to put those men in place 😂 A man to me is a protector. They should always comfort the woman their with.
Thanks for enjoying my poem 🤗
Thanks for enjoying my poem 🤗
Re: Re. Meant To Be
14th Jan 2017 2:59am
Amen to this!! From your mouth to every other mans ears...hahaha
Beautiful!
Beautiful!
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Re: Re. Meant To Be
15th Jan 2017 7:37am
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Re: Re. Meant To Be
11th Jan 2017 7:39am
I hope to be this kind of man always. I want to give my love and care only to her for now on.
Thanks for enjoying 😁
Thanks for enjoying 😁
Re. Meant To Be
10th Jan 2017 12:53pm
Only a few are lucky enough to experience a love like this...
You are a true example of what love and care should look like,
she is lucky to have you in her life!
Beautiful write, my friend!
You are a true example of what love and care should look like,
she is lucky to have you in her life!
Beautiful write, my friend!
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Re: Re. Meant To Be
11th Jan 2017 7:41am
It makes me feel very greatful when I hear that only few get that.
I am not perfect but I try for sure 😁
Beautiful comment, my friend 🤗
I am not perfect but I try for sure 😁
Beautiful comment, my friend 🤗
Re. Meant To Be
10th Jan 2017 1:18pm
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11th Jan 2017 7:55am
Re. Meant To Be
10th Jan 2017 3:56pm
The connection you speak of here is so beautiful and rare. I agree with Duende...she is indeed lucky to have you in her life. And you are lucky to have found her. :)
Willow
Willow
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Re: Re. Meant To Be
11th Jan 2017 8:01am
Re. Meant To Be
11th Jan 2017 4:09am
Your mind is brilliant and lovely, I hate to say that there are so many
women who lack this sort of affection and attention. Especially in
my culture. Unfortunately, it's almost embarrassing and difficult to
grasp. So we are made a little hard because we have to protect
ourselves. Also, heal ourselves through times of neglect and so much.
Anyway, just had to release. This is utterly beautiful by all means.
FS
women who lack this sort of affection and attention. Especially in
my culture. Unfortunately, it's almost embarrassing and difficult to
grasp. So we are made a little hard because we have to protect
ourselves. Also, heal ourselves through times of neglect and so much.
Anyway, just had to release. This is utterly beautiful by all means.
FS
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Re: Re. Meant To Be
11th Jan 2017 8:04am
It is hard to believe that most men aren't like this. I may not have always been perfect, but I have always treated the person I'm with like a princess.
I'm sure there are still a few good ones 🙂
I'm sure there are still a few good ones 🙂
Re: Re. Meant To Be
12th Jan 2017 6:20am
How beautiful, that truly means a lot to woman. Don't
ever lose sight of that part of you. :)
ever lose sight of that part of you. :)
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Re. Meant To Be
11th Jan 2017 7:39am
I think my mind is enamoured. yes this
gave me chills...all up and down cells
-Howlings
gave me chills...all up and down cells
-Howlings
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Re: Re. Meant To Be
11th Jan 2017 8:08am
I love your comment 🤗
I think all poets love to hear that 🙂
Thanks, my friend
I think all poets love to hear that 🙂
Thanks, my friend
Re. Meant To Be
11th Jan 2017 8:31am
I'll have to agree with those above, a rare and beautiful thing to find. It should always be cherished and you've captured it in beautiful poetry...
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12th Jan 2017 5:07am