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intrusive thoughts
The intusive thoughts won't stop and I have no escape from my own eyes.
You will forever circle my mind and I will forever hold my head down in shame.
To look up is a strain of a crumbled frame.
You will forever circle my mind and I will forever hold my head down in shame.
To look up is a strain of a crumbled frame.
Published 8th Jan 2017
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Anonymous
- Edited 8th Jan 2017 8:42pm
8th Jan 2017 7:58pm
Don't look in the mirror then!
Hope this advice helps or at least makes you chuckle. The latter preferably. ;-)
Seriously though, this is a powerfully short hard & hitting write - describing your inner torment well.
Hope this advice helps or at least makes you chuckle. The latter preferably. ;-)
Seriously though, this is a powerfully short hard & hitting write - describing your inner torment well.
15th Jan 2017 9:44am
