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Major Cleaning
The garage needs major cleaning
Let's take it all out and sort it
Watch that stack, which way it's leaning
The garage needs major cleaning
Forget any deeper meaning
If you look, you will be thwarted.
The garage needs major cleaning
Let's take it all out and sort it
Let's take it all out and sort it
Watch that stack, which way it's leaning
The garage needs major cleaning
Forget any deeper meaning
If you look, you will be thwarted.
The garage needs major cleaning
Let's take it all out and sort it
Published 10th Aug 2011
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This classic Triolet is about cleaning and sorting.
It is to be both taken in a literal and metaphorical sense.
Then I paradoxically challenge looking for deeper meaning in things which takes away from the literal meaning.
But all in all, it's just about cleaning
It is to be both taken in a literal and metaphorical sense.
Then I paradoxically challenge looking for deeper meaning in things which takes away from the literal meaning.
But all in all, it's just about cleaning
