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Mr rain, Please go away
Mr. rain please go away,
It's not fair,
And You promised he'd stay,
Mr. rain come back another day,
I can't breathe,
And My lungs are withering away,
My love is gone,
And he's broken me and I don't know what I've done wrong,
Mr. rain please go away,
Mr. rain please come back another day,
Mr rain why are my wrists bleeding,
And why is everyone standing around me crying and pleading,
He doesn't love me,
He didn't ever love me,
Mr. rain please make the pain away,
Please take me away,
Mr. Rain please take me away,
Because my lungs are withering away and My love has told me he no longer loves me today.
It's not fair,
And You promised he'd stay,
Mr. rain come back another day,
I can't breathe,
And My lungs are withering away,
My love is gone,
And he's broken me and I don't know what I've done wrong,
Mr. rain please go away,
Mr. rain please come back another day,
Mr rain why are my wrists bleeding,
And why is everyone standing around me crying and pleading,
He doesn't love me,
He didn't ever love me,
Mr. rain please make the pain away,
Please take me away,
Mr. Rain please take me away,
Because my lungs are withering away and My love has told me he no longer loves me today.
Published 18th Dec 2016
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18th Dec 2016 6:01am
Such a sad poem.
Love hurts in many ways believe me I know from experience.
Needless to say the best thing you can do right now is take time to heal before moving on.
Love is never fully planned to be eternal despite the costant pressure for it to be we put on it so as of result love can blind and love can also painful. So there really isn't any way to get rid of a heart break fast, you simply just take your time and leave them in the back of your memory and who knows maybe they may realize the mistake they made once they lost you and come back you never know. Hang in there.
With much love, peace. ✌🏼️
Love hurts in many ways believe me I know from experience.
Needless to say the best thing you can do right now is take time to heal before moving on.
Love is never fully planned to be eternal despite the costant pressure for it to be we put on it so as of result love can blind and love can also painful. So there really isn't any way to get rid of a heart break fast, you simply just take your time and leave them in the back of your memory and who knows maybe they may realize the mistake they made once they lost you and come back you never know. Hang in there.
With much love, peace. ✌🏼️
18th Dec 2016 2:14pm
very sad, but very expressive i sympathize with you, i hope that the rain will pass and light fills every void
21st Jan 2017 4:16am
Aww, so sullen :( but such sharp words make for fantastic ink! Nice work!!
