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PRESENT
Tall trees same hill road and hill
Morning mist and wood smoke
Cross my eyes first far then near
Fear greed recede
Night bats dawn birds chit chat
Grey brown same white and black
Cross my eyes this way and that
Fear greed recede
Resist to read the next verse
Unless you read this first
There is no happy ever after
No time gone by
Nothing meaningful
Or meaningless
Nor a time we were cursed
Not a time for laughter
Nor a time we cry
Not a best or worst
Not a just over there
Just this day these words
This gift we share
Morning mist and wood smoke
Cross my eyes first far then near
Fear greed recede
Night bats dawn birds chit chat
Grey brown same white and black
Cross my eyes this way and that
Fear greed recede
Resist to read the next verse
Unless you read this first
There is no happy ever after
No time gone by
Nothing meaningful
Or meaningless
Nor a time we were cursed
Not a time for laughter
Nor a time we cry
Not a best or worst
Not a just over there
Just this day these words
This gift we share
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Anonymous
17th Dec 2016 7:14am
Simplicity ... I am present.
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17th Dec 2016 12:09pm
Raising my cup Whale :)
A perfect breath and parallel to my ice-storm morning.
A perfect breath and parallel to my ice-storm morning.
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17th Dec 2016 3:39pm
To focus only on the moment....permitting ourselves to become totally immersed within the beauty and pleasures of it all....
Perhaps, that is one of the greatest gifts we can ever receive.
......And Whale, mo Chara, your piece so surely captures the rare, uncomplicated enjoyment of just such an occurrence....sagacious advice, indeed!
Perhaps, that is one of the greatest gifts we can ever receive.
......And Whale, mo Chara, your piece so surely captures the rare, uncomplicated enjoyment of just such an occurrence....sagacious advice, indeed!
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17th Dec 2016 4:07pm
so true most dear enchantress - whether a spoon or dish as soon as you taste it you remember what you'd been missing in the rush of it all a morsel of a moment
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Anonymous
17th Dec 2016 4:41pm
Love this write. 💓
Words in which my heart needed.
So very beautiful.
Your depths is reflected in the most lovely way...through this ink.
Words in which my heart needed.
So very beautiful.
Your depths is reflected in the most lovely way...through this ink.
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Anonymous
17th Dec 2016 8:06pm
The poetic rhythm was a spot on.
Very few can achieve; I'm not sorry to say.
Enjoyed.
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