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Defiant Dove
I'm a dove
although love
hast not shown it's face
in my disgrace
I may appoint myself thereof,
Defiant Dove.
Published 9th Aug 2011
| Edited 11th Aug 2011
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9th Aug 2011 6:04pm
oppisition or do you mean opposition?
although i find the first stanza to be unnecessary, the second stanza is magnetic and enchanting. it could absolutely stand on its own as a one stanza poem along with the fantastic tattoo
although i find the first stanza to be unnecessary, the second stanza is magnetic and enchanting. it could absolutely stand on its own as a one stanza poem along with the fantastic tattoo
11th Aug 2011 2:52am
O yea. I thought so too when I published it. the first stanza seems...just there and uneeded. Thank you for the comment. I think I'll just delete the first stanza! :D
