Take, Take, Take.

Painful to read, but a really good write!

"I picture him lustful
Greedy, grabbing my hips
Whispering, I am his" > these lines stood out for me...

Woman, you grab me by my own depths!

Thanks D for reading 💜

I just say no to prostitution!! I mean, I dunno, I'd probably try it...But, chances are, they'd pay me to go away first! Lol! But, nah, I wouldn't buy one. Sex is meaningless without a connection. Blah, blah, I'm rambling...

let me offer some feedback on your sweet inkling here!!

Wonderfully detailed work! I'm honored to follow your work here, and you paint your words so fine and carefully!

Prostitution?! Haha C Wayz you are too funny...sad truth I guess I've felt like this sometimes minus the cash 🙈😁 I wouldn't pay you to go away and I love your rambling! I love what you're saying there's no point without a connection in fact I went ages without an orgasm for that very reason...guess the mind controls the body after all...but I'll save that for another write 😜

Thanks for the read and your amazeballs comments as always mean so much to me 💜

You sure know how to give a guy the schoolgirl giggles!! Lol! Your words are sugary sweet!

"Clarity floods me;
But so does he
Leaving me feeling
Cheap, dirty and nasty"

That guy sounds like a selfish git! Hope you dont let him use you as a fucktoy again. Well crafted words F_c

Hi thebladeartist thanks for stopping by, having a read and commenting! Guess I've got a weak spot for the selfish gits...but fear not I hold my own and give as good as I get 😉 and I will never regret the experiences I have gathered 💜

This write is beautifully painful so deep. Feelings I've known

Thanks Cheesa for the comment...most of my writes are deep and dreary... I've not managed to write any optimistic or uplifting ones as of yet maybe one day lol.

I guess most of us have felt used at some point or another 💜

I feel each write I read of ures an I've felt many of the emotions. Beautiful sadness from a beautiful soul x

You're too kind. Thank you 💜

sad sign of the times too many selfish people. I never had sex, but made love, making them feel special needed. a giver not a taker.. but then people take advantage.sometimes you can't win. well done .moog.

Moog thanks for reading. Indeed people can be so selfish and take advantage of people with kind nature but I try not to let it change me 💜

Excellent write - honest and lived and well structured - interested to read more

Wow thanks Whale... glad you liked it and our experiences do seem to make the best writes 💜

Wonderful read ^^
A few girls have made this man feel cheap... hehe :-)

Thanks Devil's Child for reading and commenting!  
 
I think both men and women can be users and be used in fact I know some women that have done pretty awful things.

P.s thanks for including this in your reading list 💜

You must know most my exes...haha 😁

A friend of mine told me to check you out. Very much glad I did 🙂

Either that or there are too many mean females about ;) lol

Wow! I can't believe someone actually recommended you to read me I'm honoured also that you are happy you did 😘💜

P.s you must pass on my thanks to them!

Many mean people all around I'm sure. Woman just like to pick on me, i think ^^

I will pass it on if i ever see them again :-(
They haven't been on in awhile. And it's not like her to just up and leave without a goodbye :-/

So many men are into sex for their orgasm and nothing more. If they want a second orgasm they expect you to happily give hem head, as if it's a gift for you. Then if they get anal they've hit the jackpot cos they think they've made you once, twice, three times a lady and you loved it... i will never understand how other men can be so uncaring, selfish and greedy. Your poem speaks loudly of the plight of women and how writing a self poem can be a mantra for all.
JJ

You've hit the nail on the head JJ and sadly there are indeed so many men like that which would be fine if they were straight up from the start and didn't pretend to have feelings 😑

Thanks for your comment 💜

Thank you for writing and sharing this, I think every female does meet that one guy who takes her down this breaking path

Thanks for your comment Night_Krawler

Yeah you're totally right and boy did I used to regret it but not anymore because I think I needed these experiences to grow.


FC
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Truly great write you've done here!  A couple thoughts...just off the top of my head.  

"And why do I try
I'm pathetic
I'm weak
My future feels bleak"

To love does not make us weak in any way.  There is no weakness to be found in loving...regardless of whether or not it's returned.  It takes great courage indeed to love where it is one sided.  Which then means that there is nothing pathetic about you.  :)

"Clarity floods me;
But so does he
Leaving me feeling
Cheap, dirty and nasty"

There is pain in this section here, it throbs on the page.  Again though, it speaks of your love despite his coldness.  Be true to you, to your heart, and you will be left with no regrets.  There can be no regret found in loving, I think.  Yours is a loving soul and he doesn't realize the gift he was given.  :)
Willow

Oh Willow you have such a beautiful soul yourself! It means so much to me that you took the time to write such a beautiful and uplifting comment. I didn't know whether to cry or smile and it has definitely gave me some perspective that I should feel worthy and perhaps invest my love in the right people.

Much love and admiration to you
FC
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