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Eradicate
looking in the mirror
I see all the pain in my eyes
the wants and needs
eradicating my happiness
I feel stressed
a fucked up mess
every word’s a blade
digging in deeper
trying to clear my head
wishing to run away
forget everyone and everything
hoping people understand
It seems so easy to accept
the wrongs in my life
It seems so easy to do nothing
maybe it’s time to get up and fight
my pain is self inflicted
and that’s the hard thing to accept
trying to get help when I’m the problem
maybe it’s time I believe in me
I see all the pain in my eyes
the wants and needs
eradicating my happiness
I feel stressed
a fucked up mess
every word’s a blade
digging in deeper
trying to clear my head
wishing to run away
forget everyone and everything
hoping people understand
It seems so easy to accept
the wrongs in my life
It seems so easy to do nothing
maybe it’s time to get up and fight
my pain is self inflicted
and that’s the hard thing to accept
trying to get help when I’m the problem
maybe it’s time I believe in me
Published 16th Dec 2016
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16th Dec 2016 2:08pm
Felt every single line of it!
That last stanza is just stunning... it's like reading me...
Great to see a strong ending! Awesome write!
That last stanza is just stunning... it's like reading me...
Great to see a strong ending! Awesome write!
17th Dec 2016 11:05am
Anonymous
16th Dec 2016 2:19pm
Heartfelt ink 💓
Always believe in you.
We seem to be our own worse enemy, in many aspects.
It makes you want to run and hide. Never to surface. I understand.
However...
You are always worth the fight.
If we don't fight for ourselves, who will?
It's about peace of mind and sanity.
Although this write is a sad one, I'm happy to see the realization, at the very end.
Always believe in you.
We seem to be our own worse enemy, in many aspects.
It makes you want to run and hide. Never to surface. I understand.
However...
You are always worth the fight.
If we don't fight for ourselves, who will?
It's about peace of mind and sanity.
Although this write is a sad one, I'm happy to see the realization, at the very end.
17th Dec 2016 11:17am
I feel a lot of it is a balance
trying to do for me ends up hurting others. When doing for others i hurt myself.
But it is all about me at the end of the day.
And i should follow my feelings.
Thanks my lovely friend :-)
trying to do for me ends up hurting others. When doing for others i hurt myself.
But it is all about me at the end of the day.
And i should follow my feelings.
Thanks my lovely friend :-)
Anonymous
16th Dec 2016 3:48pm
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17th Dec 2016 11:18am
16th Dec 2016 5:30pm
17th Dec 2016 11:19am
It is heartbreaking, but it's all about moving forward ^^
Thanks for enjoying :-)
Thanks for enjoying :-)
16th Dec 2016 6:54pm
You hit some tender muscles with this one. Great write...but it stings a bit, doesn't it?
Willow
Willow
17th Dec 2016 11:20am
Balance isn't easy and once you find it, there always seems to be something to throw you off again. But believing in yourself is also a struggle...
