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For a Price You Can See Everything. Not Everything is Worth Seeing
Do you see?
Do you see like me?
I am the eyes of a million bees
Endless angles of realITY
Gathered through hours untold
Collecting the thoughts of others
The ones they sold
Do you see like me?
I am the eyes of a million bees
Endless angles of realITY
Gathered through hours untold
Collecting the thoughts of others
The ones they sold
Published 15th Dec 2016
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Outstandingly superb!!! I was blown away by the way you skillfully ended with a burst of high flair:
...Gathered through hours untold
Collecting the thoughts of others
The ones they sold...
Such a great depth!!! You took this poem to another dimension!! Encore!!!
...Gathered through hours untold
Collecting the thoughts of others
The ones they sold...
Such a great depth!!! You took this poem to another dimension!! Encore!!!
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