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Impetuous laughs

Sober along nights
Killed with happiness
Gifted with laughter

Never an end
Never an enemy
Just like madness.

Located to tranquility
Over the window
Of forgotten memories

I killed you
Inside my heart
My mind burnt.

Never ending stories
Dealing with publishers
Hoping better ending.

Written by mcjay

Published 14th Dec 2016

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Re. Impetuous laughs

crowfly

15th Dec 2016 00:57am

The first four stanzas seem to reflect the writer's deepest thoughts and passions. The last considers the practicalities. My take anyway. This is beautifully worded and one of your best even if my interpretation is lacking. Great to see you back McJay!