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Thinking
I ponder of horizons and blue skies
If there's a heavenly father and do or die
Went off track and thought about pies
Wonder if he loves me or not
I walk pass him and I sway, I trot
Thinking now if I have milk in the frig
Hungry for a snack
Open the cabinet,
oh I didn't ponder that
And I dig out chips
Wish I had dip
Didn't I want pie
This is how I ponder
Ponder when I'm high
If there's a heavenly father and do or die
Went off track and thought about pies
Wonder if he loves me or not
I walk pass him and I sway, I trot
Thinking now if I have milk in the frig
Hungry for a snack
Open the cabinet,
oh I didn't ponder that
And I dig out chips
Wish I had dip
Didn't I want pie
This is how I ponder
Ponder when I'm high
Published 8th Dec 2016
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8th Dec 2016 11:44am
Good try, but see how rhyme can lead you astray - chips in the fridge with a religious muse -- is that really what you wanted to say.
Let's hear a message next time.
Best ~ Abra
Let's hear a message next time.
Best ~ Abra
8th Dec 2016 12:04pm
Have you every been high off marijuana? You forget things. Thought about the milk but opened the cabinet instead is where I find the chips and thought about dip. The message was clear if you ever had the munchies. Thank you for reading
