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'Flame to the Moth...'
Come hither thou,
venture yon forth thy flame
cite thee desires as softly,
speaketh thy name...
Where art thou in flight?
might thee be wary...
copiously fearful of light?
fear not, the flame's might
For whilst thou truly burneth
effusively, elusively, profusively
free...flutterin' into thine embrace
would merely be welcomin'
unto thy warmth of thee...
Published 4th Dec 2016
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4th Dec 2016 4:32pm
4th Dec 2016 4:59pm
Thank you, I'm very happy to see a visit from u :) appreciate it bunches :)
4th Dec 2016 6:05pm
Love the Shakespearian verbiage.
I've thought about trying something like that.
Did some research, but didn't find what I needed.
But, I definitely love reading this.
I've thought about trying something like that.
Did some research, but didn't find what I needed.
But, I definitely love reading this.
4th Dec 2016 6:36pm
Thanks bro. I admittedly am NOT an expert at it, but I've never really tried
too hard at being one either lol...
Truly appreciate you much bro. :)
too hard at being one either lol...
Truly appreciate you much bro. :)
4th Dec 2016 6:38pm
I feel ya on that. It's not very common, so it definitely stands out nicely.
4th Dec 2016 7:01pm
5th Dec 2016 2:30am
Ahh intrique is a powerful force..really enjoyed your take on it...never really thought about the flame being just as drawn to the moth...just as intringued..til now..This was spectacular !!
5th Dec 2016 8:54am
Yea you know how weird my mind works by now lol... thank you my sweetness, truly grateful for your continued support always :)
5th Dec 2016 6:03am
5th Dec 2016 9:24pm
5th Dec 2016 5:00pm
Po in this one the art rings - personification of a flame as it beguiles the inevitable fate - fine write and subject
5th Dec 2016 9:03pm
Thank you so much bro. Deeply flattering you think of this as "art"
Truly n always appreciate you :)
Truly n always appreciate you :)
Anonymous
5th Dec 2016 10:27pm
Is there anything you can not do? lol
Awesome write PIKM with a language that's become extinct and like a moth drawn to a flame, we keep coming back to your work, you always have some kind of treat waiting :)
Awesome write PIKM with a language that's become extinct and like a moth drawn to a flame, we keep coming back to your work, you always have some kind of treat waiting :)
5th Dec 2016 11:45pm
Aaaawwww Vee... You surely have a big juicy, wet kiss awaiting you! :) thank you my sweetheart, flattered n grateful truly for your praise n support :)
6th Dec 2016 11:14pm
7th Dec 2016 2:02am
Thank you sweetheart, I'm very pleased you found this to your liking...
Appreciate your support always :)
Appreciate your support always :)
7th Dec 2016 2:57am
Love the use of archaic words!
"effusively, elusively, profusively
free...flutterin' into thine embrace" > this is pure artistry!
Another masterpiece from your pen!
"effusively, elusively, profusively
free...flutterin' into thine embrace" > this is pure artistry!
Another masterpiece from your pen!
7th Dec 2016 11:00am
Gosh... Hope I don't bang into wall today, becuz you plastered a smile on my face so wide I can't see! lol thank you sweetness, truly n always blessed by your support :)
7th Dec 2016 3:53pm
8th Dec 2016 00:39am
Ahh, you've left me with an image of flame fingers dancing a "come hither" taunt to a timid, fluttering moth. It's very captivating! :)
Willow
Willow
8th Dec 2016 1:09pm
Aaaawwwww... Love that you saw this so vividly my sweetheart... Truly
appreciate your continued support :)
appreciate your continued support :)
12th Dec 2016 1:52pm
Thank you bro. I'm most flattered by your kind review n continued support of my ink... :)
21st Dec 2016 3:50pm
25th Dec 2016 9:16pm
Wow I'm so sorry my sweetheart, I thought I replied to ur comment already! :( but yea... Thank u so much, ur a star in my eyes :)
Anonymous
25th Dec 2016 10:42am
i'm diggin the play on the title
and this here really flooded the mind with imagery
".flutterin' into thine embrace"
pure sensual poetic passion bro
and this here really flooded the mind with imagery
".flutterin' into thine embrace"
pure sensual poetic passion bro
25th Dec 2016 9:19pm
Yo bro! How's my notha one from tha Otha one? :)... Hope all is well n ur holidays are great. N big thanks for the love always kid... :)
Anonymous
8th Jan 2017 3:55pm
nice writing here. i'm glad to you are consistent with your classic-type verse. so many use the language to fit a line but never continue.
10th Jan 2017 10:00am
All I can tell you is it's not my usual style but I do have admiration for Shakespeare's gifted ink :) thank you my dear, appreciate you much :)
10th Jan 2017 9:17am
11th Jan 2017 4:06pm
Aaaaaaawwwww well I love your comment very much, so thank you! :) appreciate the RL add too! :)
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