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Legos
]Interchangeable people,
ephemeral parts,
segmented smiles
flash
the bait
of transient fraternity.
It means nothing -
less than nothing -
because they are
not
the sum
of their wandering segments.
Nothing ventured
nothing gained
but the
loss
of mercurial people
with interchangeable hearts.
© H. Newberry
ephemeral parts,
segmented smiles
flash
the bait
of transient fraternity.
It means nothing -
less than nothing -
because they are
not
the sum
of their wandering segments.
Nothing ventured
nothing gained
but the
loss
of mercurial people
with interchangeable hearts.
© H. Newberry
Published 3rd Dec 2016
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3rd Dec 2016 1:59pm
I love both the metaphorical and literal meaning of this. I first read hearts as parts (I have a house full of Lego parts from a grandson, and still on my first cup of tea), so am glad I reread it slowly.
I admire your ability to say so much in relation to humanity in so few words. In addition to emphasis, I admired the jagged form and equated it to strewn pieces, some individual, some linked with others, the majority incomplete.
I admire your ability to say so much in relation to humanity in so few words. In addition to emphasis, I admired the jagged form and equated it to strewn pieces, some individual, some linked with others, the majority incomplete.
3rd Dec 2016 3:18pm
5th Dec 2016 5:16pm
