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Darkest color of a Sunset
Your eyes are different,
The color that radiated off them,
Even though they appeared dark to everyone,
Even yourself, but they were not,
There was a warmth,
A color of bliss,
When leaves fall, your eyes appear,
The color I can’t explain in words,
But if I could I would say they were,
Like a amber but not yet amber,
Like the softest of the darkest brown,
Like the darkest color of a sunset,
Because that’s what your eyes remind me of,
The darkest color of a sunset.
Published 3rd Dec 2016
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3rd Dec 2016 12:02pm
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3rd Dec 2016 4:51pm
Beautifully written , honestly I could imagine you wrote this entire poem in your head while you're gazing into someone's eyes, a moment you made last forever by penning this. Nice write I like.
13th Mar 2017 2:43pm
