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Not a Fantasy
~If you could accept me for me
then you would see
my love isn’t make believe
or fantasy~
I’ve known her warmth
since we were teenagers
we experienced our fair share
of thunderstorms
I failed to protect her
from this insufferable weather
one man just can’t
fight all the world’s
elements
the test of time has shown me
humility
forced me to see
my self righteousness
ain't worth shit
but I refuse to stay down
on the cold ground
because that’s the true test of faith
to be blinded
but still guided
towards love
lost inside
her angel eyes
I see forgiveness
beyond comprehension
seeing something in me
I thought was long deceased
but she still pulls my soul up to the surface
showing me true happiness
people come and go
but me and her are forever
I feel it with her hands around me
even when I push her away
may not be fantasy
but it’s a reality
I wouldn’t give up
for all the fairy dust
then you would see
my love isn’t make believe
or fantasy~
I’ve known her warmth
since we were teenagers
we experienced our fair share
of thunderstorms
I failed to protect her
from this insufferable weather
one man just can’t
fight all the world’s
elements
the test of time has shown me
humility
forced me to see
my self righteousness
ain't worth shit
but I refuse to stay down
on the cold ground
because that’s the true test of faith
to be blinded
but still guided
towards love
lost inside
her angel eyes
I see forgiveness
beyond comprehension
seeing something in me
I thought was long deceased
but she still pulls my soul up to the surface
showing me true happiness
people come and go
but me and her are forever
I feel it with her hands around me
even when I push her away
may not be fantasy
but it’s a reality
I wouldn’t give up
for all the fairy dust
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Re. Not a Fantasy
1st Dec 2016 11:42am
Glorious picture with glorious words written indeed it's a good combination and gift you have
XD
XD
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Re: Re. Not a Fantasy
4th Dec 2016 7:31am
Re. Not a Fantasy
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1st Dec 2016 12:14pm
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Re: Re. Not a Fantasy
4th Dec 2016 7:35am
Re. Not a Fantasy
1st Dec 2016 12:32pm
"we experienced our fair share
of thunderstorms
I failed to protect her
from this insufferable weather
one man just can’t
fight all the world’s
elements"
These are true lines here. Still, for her to have a friend who would be willing to try is a precious thing indeed. I feel honored to have read a moment in this beautiful part of your life. :)
Willow
of thunderstorms
I failed to protect her
from this insufferable weather
one man just can’t
fight all the world’s
elements"
These are true lines here. Still, for her to have a friend who would be willing to try is a precious thing indeed. I feel honored to have read a moment in this beautiful part of your life. :)
Willow
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Re: Re. Not a Fantasy
4th Dec 2016 7:37am
This is a big part of my life. If not most my life... hehe 😁
Thanks for enjoying! 🤗
Thanks for enjoying! 🤗
Re. Not a Fantasy
Anonymous
1st Dec 2016 12:40pm
I love this vulnerable write 💓
I know the depths of these words, and that is what true love does. It sets apart, from the rest.
That is what keeps our hearts linked and drawn to the one, always.
Beautiful ink.
I know the depths of these words, and that is what true love does. It sets apart, from the rest.
That is what keeps our hearts linked and drawn to the one, always.
Beautiful ink.
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Re: Re. Not a Fantasy
4th Dec 2016 7:39am
It's a known feeling for me. Something I know is always true, even when I try to dismiss it.
Thanks Heat 😁
Thanks Heat 😁
Re. Not a Fantasy
1st Dec 2016 3:17pm
a beautiful and deep love indeed DC sounds so lovely with her angel eyes, with you by her side..
love Crim
love Crim
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Re: Re. Not a Fantasy
4th Dec 2016 7:47am
Re. Not a Fantasy
2nd Dec 2016 8:30am
The ups and downs of true love, strength in vulnerability,
All important on that shared journey...
All important on that shared journey...
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Re: Re. Not a Fantasy
4th Dec 2016 12:38pm
Re. Not a Fantasy
2nd Dec 2016 5:13pm
"to be blinded
but still guided
towards love" > my favorite lines... breathtakingly beautiful!
Such a vulnerable and at the same time hopeful poem...
but still guided
towards love" > my favorite lines... breathtakingly beautiful!
Such a vulnerable and at the same time hopeful poem...
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Re: Re. Not a Fantasy
4th Dec 2016 12:42pm
I see that your taking a break Duende.
I hope it's a very short break!
You always have a home here, don't ever feel like you can't come back ^^
Thanks for enjoy my poem :-)
I hope it's a very short break!
You always have a home here, don't ever feel like you can't come back ^^
Thanks for enjoy my poem :-)
Re. Not a Fantasy
this is so beautiful and tranquillizing,
again as always your words speak
to us..
i love the between details which show
your attention, affection and respect
and admiration.. well actually what
ever you two give and take and do
for each other..
my night is done, this was sweetening
-Howlings
again as always your words speak
to us..
i love the between details which show
your attention, affection and respect
and admiration.. well actually what
ever you two give and take and do
for each other..
my night is done, this was sweetening
-Howlings
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Re: Re. Not a Fantasy
4th Dec 2016 12:50pm
Your comments always make me smile :-)
You are so very sweet.
Thanks for enjoying ^^
You are so very sweet.
Thanks for enjoying ^^
Re: Re. Not a Fantasy
5th Dec 2016 2:34am
Re. Not a Fantasy
6th Dec 2016 8:17pm
Beautiful DC..I wouldnt give up for all the fairy dust...Sweetly said!
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Re: Re. Not a Fantasy
7th Dec 2016 1:07am