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The loop
It's get a bit better
Then it gets a bit worse
One day I'm a go getter
The next day it hurts
Why am I like this
What did I do
To deserve the devil's kiss
Up, down, up, down
Something is surely amiss
Help me, someone please help me
There has to be a way out
For if there is, I cannot see
Filled with nothing but dread, suffering and doubt
There is no way I will ever be free
Then it gets a bit worse
One day I'm a go getter
The next day it hurts
Why am I like this
What did I do
To deserve the devil's kiss
Up, down, up, down
Something is surely amiss
Help me, someone please help me
There has to be a way out
For if there is, I cannot see
Filled with nothing but dread, suffering and doubt
There is no way I will ever be free
Published 26th Nov 2016
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26th Nov 2016 11:18pm
27th Nov 2016 9:05am
28th Nov 2016 1:28am
I wish I could say I didn't know how this feels... Sadly I know it too well.
4th Dec 2016 1:10pm
This seems very familiar to me. I don't go through this myself, but someone I recently started talking to. Odd feeling. Definitely captured my attention.
4th Dec 2016 10:29pm
Yeah definitely not fun being on an emotional rollercoaster. Thanks for the comment :)
