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the fire still burns
as she spread her wings
ready to take a flight
she takes a breath
and the smell of new life
incites her fiery spirit
the hunt begins
as she looks for a prey
to satisfy her need
she picks a target
and dances around him
longing for his flesh
she draws him close
and unleashes the beast
awakening his hunger
aroused by her scent
his excitement increases
evoking carnal desires
he circles around her
and then rips off her wings
her naked body shivers
he pushes her down
and starts to devour her
eager to eat her alive
she put up a fight
turns her nails into knives
as teeth pierce her skin
they struggle a while
before she finally gives up
surrendering her being
driven by nature
they feed off each other
to satisfy primal lust
roars fill the night
as their bodies on fire
erupt like a volcano
exhausted they rest
but her instinct takes over
unquenchable as she is
she repairs her wings
and continues the hunt
her fire burns again
as she spread her wings
ready to take a flight
she takes a breath
and the smell of new life
incites her fiery spirit
the hunt begins
as she looks for a prey
to satisfy her need
she picks a target
and dances around him
longing for his flesh
she draws him close
and unleashes the beast
awakening his hunger
aroused by her scent
his excitement increases
evoking carnal desires
he circles around her
and then rips off her wings
her naked body shivers
he pushes her down
and starts to devour her
eager to eat her alive
she put up a fight
turns her nails into knives
as teeth pierce her skin
they struggle a while
before she finally gives up
surrendering her being
driven by nature
they feed off each other
to satisfy primal lust
roars fill the night
as their bodies on fire
erupt like a volcano
exhausted they rest
but her instinct takes over
unquenchable as she is
she repairs her wings
and continues the hunt
her fire burns again
Published 25th Nov 2016
| Edited 3rd Dec 2024
Author's Note
Karen Kamon - Manhunt.
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25th Nov 2016 3:38pm
Anonymous
25th Nov 2016 3:53pm
O....I love this! 💓
Such a feisty, raw passionate piece. One with such deep meaning behind every word.
The hunt to quench the insatiable needs, yet....the heart lingers, dangling within the mix.
Amazing imagery.
Great ink, sweet Duende.
Such a feisty, raw passionate piece. One with such deep meaning behind every word.
The hunt to quench the insatiable needs, yet....the heart lingers, dangling within the mix.
Amazing imagery.
Great ink, sweet Duende.
Thank you for your enthusiastic comment, lovely Heart!
I had no idea people would be so excited about this one and your words are so heartwarming and smile inducing... I can't ask for more!
You've just made my day :-D
I had no idea people would be so excited about this one and your words are so heartwarming and smile inducing... I can't ask for more!
You've just made my day :-D
Anonymous
25th Nov 2016 5:50pm
BRAVO!!!!!! Duende.......this is an outstanding ink......luv the feel of it.....the pic is wicked.......can't praise you enough on this masterpiece.......thanks for letting us breathe upon it......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Thank you so much, flowergirl!
Your comments always make me smile! Wasn't expecting words like 'outstanding' or 'masterpiece' on this one, so I am honored! Great to hear you love the pic... I have that on my computer for so long and I always loved it (I'm a fire sign)
Love, Duende
Your comments always make me smile! Wasn't expecting words like 'outstanding' or 'masterpiece' on this one, so I am honored! Great to hear you love the pic... I have that on my computer for so long and I always loved it (I'm a fire sign)
Love, Duende
25th Nov 2016 5:58pm
Hot write! Carnal desires erupting from the fires of your mind...for us to feast upon!
26th Nov 2016 5:43am
Thank you so much for your comment, Chivo!
Great to hear you love this one! To be honest... I never planned it to turn out like this (I really wanted to write about rebirth) but the words went this way... must be a result of my overactive mind and imagination ;-)
Great to hear you love this one! To be honest... I never planned it to turn out like this (I really wanted to write about rebirth) but the words went this way... must be a result of my overactive mind and imagination ;-)
26th Nov 2016 8:38am
I understand that feeling. Many of mine end up taking twists and turns of their own. I've written a few about rebirth/phoenix. It's a topic that I really enjoy writing about.
26th Nov 2016 8:51am
Glad to hear I'm not the only one ;-)
I will have a look at your work... always love to read rebirth related poetry!
Was planning on reading more of you anyway, but that will come!
I will have a look at your work... always love to read rebirth related poetry!
Was planning on reading more of you anyway, but that will come!
26th Nov 2016 4:41pm
Anonymous
25th Nov 2016 8:33pm
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26th Nov 2016 5:44am
Yeah... no idea where that came from, but glad to hear you like it :-)
Thank you so much for your comment, Boian!
Thank you so much for your comment, Boian!
25th Nov 2016 8:42pm
I love that she lived, surrendered and flew away on her own terms! ☺
Willow
Willow
26th Nov 2016 5:45am
I got a bit carried away with this one ;-)
Great to hear you like it!
Thanks for your comment, Willow!
Great to hear you like it!
Thanks for your comment, Willow!
25th Nov 2016 10:05pm
This was smoker my dear! Visually intense ( in the minds eye lol) n sexy as hell! :)
26th Nov 2016 5:47am
Wow... those are some amazing words, Poetik!
Great to hear you enjoyed the ride :-)
Thank you so much for your comment!
Great to hear you enjoyed the ride :-)
Thank you so much for your comment!
26th Nov 2016 5:06am
Exactly! And that is why I want a Phoenix tattoo!
Always happy to see you on my page, DC
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment!
P.S. No awesome? ;-)
Always happy to see you on my page, DC
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment!
P.S. No awesome? ;-)
Anonymous
26th Nov 2016 6:01am
Woman, you are ravenous all in this piece! ;)
and never hesitate the breaths of your soul,
and never hesitate the breaths of your soul,
26th Nov 2016 7:34am
Had to look up ravenous... oh yes, I am (lol)
Thank you for your amazing comment, lady :-)
Thank you for your amazing comment, lady :-)
26th Nov 2016 8:24pm
The phoenix will not be extinguished, putting up a heroic fight to rise once more. A thrilling and predatory erotic from a fledgling poet soon to catch fire herself. Impressive!
27th Nov 2016 5:22am
Thank you so much for your comment, Crowfly!
Great to hear you found this one to be impressive :-)
I accidentally turned Phoenix into a maneater, but yeah... I kinda liked it (lol)
Great to hear you found this one to be impressive :-)
I accidentally turned Phoenix into a maneater, but yeah... I kinda liked it (lol)
26th Nov 2016 9:52pm
very imaginative..i love it.
'he circles around her
and then rips off her wings
her naked body shivers'
'she put up a fight
turns her nails into knives
as teeth pierce her skin '
i truly enjoy metaphysical eroticas..
and this here was a yummy feast
for the mind Duende
loving that pic as well!!!!
'he circles around her
and then rips off her wings
her naked body shivers'
'she put up a fight
turns her nails into knives
as teeth pierce her skin '
i truly enjoy metaphysical eroticas..
and this here was a yummy feast
for the mind Duende
loving that pic as well!!!!
Hey Naajir, I'm so glad to hear you love this one!
I am always honored by your comments :-)
You made me smile by mentioning those two stanzas, because I really like them!
I knew I had to put some references to Phoenix in the poem as a reminder for the readers that I wasn't writing about a regular girl, so yeah... happy that you highlighted them :-)
Great to hear you love the pic... that one is very dear to me!
Thank you so much for your visit and feedback!
I am always honored by your comments :-)
You made me smile by mentioning those two stanzas, because I really like them!
I knew I had to put some references to Phoenix in the poem as a reminder for the readers that I wasn't writing about a regular girl, so yeah... happy that you highlighted them :-)
Great to hear you love the pic... that one is very dear to me!
Thank you so much for your visit and feedback!
27th Nov 2016 6:39am
Powerful and destructive in her nature, she rises again...
Elegant and stunningly seductive all at once, it should have been posted long ago.
Very beautiful poetry, Duende...
Elegant and stunningly seductive all at once, it should have been posted long ago.
Very beautiful poetry, Duende...
Thank you so much for your comment, dear Kasai!
Elegant and stunningly seductive... I can't ask for more :-)
About not posting it long ago... I started writing just a few months ago and when I came here I was very insecure! Still am, but this site is giving me the self confidence I need to feel safe enough to post writings I'm hesitant about!
I really appreciate your visits and continuous support!
Elegant and stunningly seductive... I can't ask for more :-)
About not posting it long ago... I started writing just a few months ago and when I came here I was very insecure! Still am, but this site is giving me the self confidence I need to feel safe enough to post writings I'm hesitant about!
I really appreciate your visits and continuous support!
27th Nov 2016 10:32am
I can totally relate, I'm still working on the whole, insecurity thing myself. Keep up the good work, Duende, your poetry shines...
27th Nov 2016 5:32pm
That's such an amazing thing to write @ your poetry shines!
Working on becoming less insecure is hard work, I really hope one day you are able to embrace all facets of your being... know you have a beautiful mind and soul!
Thank you for your words... I so appreciate you, Kasai!
Working on becoming less insecure is hard work, I really hope one day you are able to embrace all facets of your being... know you have a beautiful mind and soul!
Thank you for your words... I so appreciate you, Kasai!
17th Mar 2017 12:23pm
So so perfect; raw, carnal and absolutely beautiful. I'm totally in love with this piece and your style of writing!
19th Mar 2017 4:33am
Wow... that's such an amazing thing to say! I can't ask for a better compliment, thank you so much!!!
