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Reverence
I loved her before I touched her
before I held her hand
before I knew they’d be an end
a cataclysmic last stand
She rearranged perfection
long held within my mind
we lashed our hearts together
with memories as strong as time
then one afternoon a pinnacle
our love became replete
when I held her slender ankles
in my hands
and kissed the bottoms
of her stockinged feet
before I held her hand
before I knew they’d be an end
a cataclysmic last stand
She rearranged perfection
long held within my mind
we lashed our hearts together
with memories as strong as time
then one afternoon a pinnacle
our love became replete
when I held her slender ankles
in my hands
and kissed the bottoms
of her stockinged feet
Published 22nd Nov 2016
| Edited 2nd Dec 2016
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22nd Nov 2016 5:25pm
Content good. Strong emitions jumping out. The title, though... It confuses me.
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23rd Nov 2016 4:01am
With love comes reverence for the one loved.
Though the relationship didn't last the deep
respect did which transcended the carnal aspects
of a relationship and where small affections meant
so much. I hope this answer helps.
Though the relationship didn't last the deep
respect did which transcended the carnal aspects
of a relationship and where small affections meant
so much. I hope this answer helps.
22nd Nov 2016 9:54pm
2nd Dec 2016 5:46am
I hope you read it again, and feel the love which permeates and hopefully over shadows the loss. It was a most wonderful moment.
Thank you for your perspective. I see it.
Thank you for your perspective. I see it.
