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The Bourbon
Think it's the little bit of mint
that separates the chaos and the anger
About a third of the bottle gone
when the love starts to kick in
Somewhere in the midst of my work day
thoughts of 3 fingers neat starts to intrigue me
Cool evening, sipping, Bowie's Heathen on the ancient stereo
How I miss that fucker
Refilling my glass
we never drink just one. ...
that separates the chaos and the anger
About a third of the bottle gone
when the love starts to kick in
Somewhere in the midst of my work day
thoughts of 3 fingers neat starts to intrigue me
Cool evening, sipping, Bowie's Heathen on the ancient stereo
How I miss that fucker
Refilling my glass
we never drink just one. ...
Published 18th Nov 2016
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Anonymous
18th Nov 2016 1:15am
The imperfect perfect mixture Bowie and Bouban.
I can feel that smooth burn, right now.
chilling beside you.
I can feel that smooth burn, right now.
chilling beside you.
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Anonymous
18th Nov 2016 2:19am
And me.....well........nope.....still haven't gotten around to it....one day I just may surprise you with one of my comments on this type of a "bottoms up" scribe....ltm
Virgin like
- S
xo
Virgin like
- S
xo
18th Nov 2016 2:26am
Love your chin , would look even better with a bourbon and cum chaser ....
Xx
Xx
Anonymous
18th Nov 2016 2:37am
I'd be honored and it would be my pleasure to have you de-virginize me...
xx back atcha babe
xx back atcha babe
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Anonymous
19th Nov 2016 2:42am
Poet.. bourbon is a wonderful thing.. i miss, Bowie as well.. great ink.. maybe someday three glasses.. and a toast.. you, Minerva, and i.. besides who better to show us around NYC!!
Dave
Dave
19th Nov 2016 3:26am
Make that 4, we'll bring my queen as well. She drinks a little wine and some irish whiskey, hasn't mastered the bourbon yet ....
19th Nov 2016 4:23am
I haven't been able to have a drink for at least three years, but this poem really tempted me (lol) - I so miss the occaisional booze :-)
19th Nov 2016 12:10pm
I don't drink for that much enjoyment anymore, I drink to blot out the social riot in my head. Bourbon dulls me out after dealing with customers all day. I hope you have some substance that wires you happy ....
