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Wrapped in Love
My hands they
hunger to hold...
Thighs so soft....
warmth to behold.
So smooth and
so hungrily spread..
Between them my
hand forcefully led.
Fingers planted inside
sweet treat...
To give all of self
so complete.
To hear your breaths
taken deep...
To feel warm nectar
slowly seep...
Wanting to taste
your sweet treat.
Filled with love..
wrapped in heat.
hunger to hold...
Thighs so soft....
warmth to behold.
So smooth and
so hungrily spread..
Between them my
hand forcefully led.
Fingers planted inside
sweet treat...
To give all of self
so complete.
To hear your breaths
taken deep...
To feel warm nectar
slowly seep...
Wanting to taste
your sweet treat.
Filled with love..
wrapped in heat.
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Re. Wrapped in Love
14th Nov 2016 10:17pm
Re: Re. Wrapped in Love
13th Dec 2016 3:34am
Thank you so much for you kind words Sweet One. I appreciate the
read.
Keith
read.
Keith
Re. Wrapped in Love
15th Nov 2016 4:49pm
I love the rhythm of this sweet, sensual treat! This was very well written.
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Re: Re. Wrapped in Love
13th Dec 2016 3:35am
Ms Lissa
Your words are more than kind and I would like to thank you for the read and sweet comment.
Keith
Your words are more than kind and I would like to thank you for the read and sweet comment.
Keith
Re. Wrapped in Love
16th Nov 2016 11:07am
Sensual, not what I am used to reading in the erotica genre, but it embodies the beauty in longing for love making. Well done!
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Re: Re. Wrapped in Love
13th Dec 2016 3:37am
Goddess
I am glad that I have given you a little different slant on erotica. Thank you for the kind words.
Keith
I am glad that I have given you a little different slant on erotica. Thank you for the kind words.
Keith
Re. Wrapped in Love
16th Nov 2016 11:08am
Sensual, not what I am used to reading in the erotica genre, but it embodies the beauty in longing for love making. Well done!
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Re. Wrapped in Love
16th Nov 2016 11:58pm
Re: Re. Wrapped in Love
13th Dec 2016 3:39am
Well I thank you for the comment
and the advice. I think that was quite witty....."go deeper" when speaking of the erotic genre. :) thank you again
Keith
and the advice. I think that was quite witty....."go deeper" when speaking of the erotic genre. :) thank you again
Keith
Re. Wrapped in Love
Anonymous
26th Nov 2016 4:27am
Welcome to DU 2b!! Wonderful classy erotic ink.......really enjoyed this.....great start.......hope to read more of you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Wrapped in Love
13th Dec 2016 3:41am
Thank you for the comment and the read. Very sweet words Ms Flower.
Keith
Keith
Re. Wrapped in Love
27th Nov 2016 6:02pm
Re: Re. Wrapped in Love
13th Dec 2016 3:42am
I would like to say thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Greatly appreciated
Keith
Keith
Re. Wrapped in Love
12th Dec 2016 1:40am
Re: Re. Wrapped in Love
13th Dec 2016 3:44am
I thank you for seeing and feeling the words. Your read and time are greatly appreciated.
Keith
Keith
Re. Wrapped in Love
27th Jan 2017 2:19am