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'We-in-our-ache-shun' (reincarnation)... A Leasing Static/Poetikmind collaboration
A healing pause of thought,
Or maybe fucking myself/
again, cause I'm not even
sure if you’ll even read this,
usually my breaths
go unnoticed ||
so here it goes something,
nothing, maybe everything ;
I’ll wear your shadings
underneath til twined rightfully
in place, to co-exist with fluent
strands of you
between philosophies infused
with mêlées and `vulgar erotic
fumes; I lay in quietude stuffing
myself with thoughts of you /
softly hard / slowly deep
simultaneously projecting kisses
to your scarred skin and irises;
to let you know how much it's
gonna hurt to ache within my
depths, but I need you to take
this: wet constricting,
concealing,
convoking strangulation
with my thighs swathed and
bounded around you / refusing
to let go,
I‘ll feed you substances from
my vibrational Tibetan body;/
over stand that my wants have
transpired into something else,
since being constantly dispelled
from hearts
now I’ve nothing left to offer
but coated blood tinged
stroked honey; still,
I promise not to deny the veins
of your psalms
what im trying to say is show me
your strange, something different...
It's more about showin'
you somethin' different
so why would it be strange
If you could feel my want
This ache of soul...
to feed of your substance,
that sticky sweet molten desire,
to crawl inside of you, to dine
on the bones of oft times
rejection...
To quell the ache of climax
at it's pinnacle of lustful insanity
to quiet the cries of this lonely
heart...
So beg for my rod of hunger
as it pledges 'blood ties' unto
your salacious honey coated
walls...
to be my reflection of belief
that you are my psalms unto
which I supplicate to...
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Re. 'We-in-our-ache-shun' (reincarnation)... A Leasing Static/Poetikmi
8th Nov 2016 1:59am
I love this poem. In a sick and twisted way I thought I was reading a poem from a admirer or stalker. Sorry if I offended you
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Re: Re. 'We-in-our-ache-shun' (reincarnation)... A Leasing Static/Poet
8th Nov 2016 2:05am
Lmao... Nah no stalker here! lol just two writers writin... Thank you though for the thoughts n time spent on our effort... we both appreciate it greatly :)
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Anonymous
- Edited 8th Nov 2016 2:11am
8th Nov 2016 2:10am
Lmao! I needed this laugh, thank you both
the joy of interpretation, gotta love it
the joy of interpretation, gotta love it
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8th Nov 2016 2:13am
As soon as I saw you did a collab, I knew it would be magic!
It's hard to choose a favorite line/part because they are all beautiful ♥
This is truly a unique piece... deeply felt... well done, you two!
P.S. It might be a Dutch problem, but I can't submit a comment when the Subject is too long?
Sorry, I had to cut the title in half :-/
It's hard to choose a favorite line/part because they are all beautiful ♥
This is truly a unique piece... deeply felt... well done, you two!
P.S. It might be a Dutch problem, but I can't submit a comment when the Subject is too long?
Sorry, I had to cut the title in half :-/
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Anonymous
8th Nov 2016 2:16am
It's ok beauty, not a problem at all.
what matter most is that you enjoy
the creation of, and I am exclusively
honoured to have you here with us.
what matter most is that you enjoy
the creation of, and I am exclusively
honoured to have you here with us.
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Ditto on what LS said, if you liked it
That's more than enough for me... Thank you sweetie, we are grateful for the support :)
That's more than enough for me... Thank you sweetie, we are grateful for the support :)
Re. 'We-in-our-ache-shun' (reincarnation)... A Leasing Static/Poetikmi
Anonymous
8th Nov 2016 2:48am
This is a very sensual piece of work...i really enjoyed the mood of this..from woman to man... this heightens the senses..lovely collab indeed..
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Anonymous
8th Nov 2016 2:52am
Thank you for your humbling
comment sir, it is more than
appreciated. And is the scenic
route we wanted to explore.
comment sir, it is more than
appreciated. And is the scenic
route we wanted to explore.
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Re: Re. 'We-in-our-ache-shun' (reincarnation)... A Leasing Static/Poet
8th Nov 2016 2:54am
Thank you my dear bro. Speaking for us both I am deeply grateful, n humbled...
Re. 'We-in-our-ache-shun' (reincarnation)... A Leasing Static/Poetikmi
Anonymous
8th Nov 2016 6:49am
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Re: Re. 'We-in-our-ache-shun' (reincarnation)... A Leasing Static/Poet
8th Nov 2016 8:14am
Thank you so very much my friend
we both appreciate your thoughts n support on this, n are pleased you enjoyed :)
we both appreciate your thoughts n support on this, n are pleased you enjoyed :)
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Anonymous
8th Nov 2016 1:15pm
It's so good to see your exclamation
marks and presence here with us.
thank you!
marks and presence here with us.
thank you!
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Re. 'We-in-our-ache-shun' (reincarnation)... A Leasing Static/Poetikmi
8th Nov 2016 1:19pm
why in the holy name of shiva
have i not read leashing static before [?]
clearly i've been missing out.
tiny gods, you two
your unique diction sets you apart
& yet this works incredibly well...
... in awe of your collaborative talents
simply loved
xo
have i not read leashing static before [?]
clearly i've been missing out.
tiny gods, you two
your unique diction sets you apart
& yet this works incredibly well...
... in awe of your collaborative talents
simply loved
xo
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Re: Re. 'We-in-our-ache-shun' (reincarnation)... A Leasing Static/Poet
8th Nov 2016 9:45pm
Yea, Leasing is a very talented woman Mami, n deserves any n all props she gets! Thank you for the sweet words of support n the list add!? Wow... :)
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Anonymous
8th Nov 2016 11:06pm
Thank you so much for
your adding praise. It's
inspiring. I find you are
equally rare as well.
In the holy name of Shiva
again thank you, gorgeous
your adding praise. It's
inspiring. I find you are
equally rare as well.
In the holy name of Shiva
again thank you, gorgeous
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Re. 'We-in-our-ache-shun' (reincarnation)... A Leasing Static/Poetikmi
8th Nov 2016 1:45pm
What a beautifully written piece of art! Your voices are so beautiful together. I very much enjoyed this piece. Well done, both of you. :)
Willow
Willow
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Anonymous
8th Nov 2016 11:15pm
Thank you Willow,
so much for your commentary,
coming from us both.
we do deeply, undeniably
welcome it and your
presence.
so much for your commentary,
coming from us both.
we do deeply, undeniably
welcome it and your
presence.
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9th Nov 2016 8:15am
Re. 'We-in-our-ache-shun' (reincarnation)... A Leasing Static/Poetikmi
You two got some elevating
condensation going on.
My brotha you did your thing,
by following her unspoken
suggestions.
I love the nature of you two
he being your mantle and she
becoming your peace, more
than a piece
Damn. iim lost in thought , perfect
Unification and the colorful tones
Speechless and blest to read this
condensation going on.
My brotha you did your thing,
by following her unspoken
suggestions.
I love the nature of you two
he being your mantle and she
becoming your peace, more
than a piece
Damn. iim lost in thought , perfect
Unification and the colorful tones
Speechless and blest to read this
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Re: Re. 'We-in-our-ache-shun' (reincarnation)... A Leasing Static/Poet
9th Nov 2016 8:18am
Aaaawww bro. We are blessed to have your support! Thank you so much, pleased it struck a cord in you :)
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Anonymous
- Edited 9th Nov 2016 3:05pm
9th Nov 2016 3:02pm
Thank so much your for
observation/compliment.
means much. Inspiring
one
By the way, I love your
name
observation/compliment.
means much. Inspiring
one
By the way, I love your
name
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- Edited 9th Jun 2019 1:47pm
9th Nov 2016 3:31am
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Re: Re. 'We-in-our-ache-shun' (reincarnation)... A Leasing Static/Poet
9th Nov 2016 8:21am
Firstly, mind lickin my lips too? lol
secondly, indebted we are to you for feelin the passion n all within... Truly
grateful to you my dear as always for your support :)
secondly, indebted we are to you for feelin the passion n all within... Truly
grateful to you my dear as always for your support :)
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- Edited 9th Jun 2019 1:47pm
9th Nov 2016 12:23pm
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9th Nov 2016 1:44pm
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Anonymous
9th Nov 2016 3:08pm
Thank you, Osexual! for the
imagery and comment.
we appreciate it doll
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Re. 'We-in-our-ache-shun' (reincarnation)... A Leasing Static/Poetikmi
9th Nov 2016 8:28am
Poetess and poet come together, such an amazing melding of minds here. Two great talents complimenting eachother perfectly...
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9th Nov 2016 1:46pm
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Anonymous
9th Nov 2016 3:09pm
Aw, hello dearest Kasai!
we are so grateful to
have you here joining us
for this voyage.
we are so grateful to
have you here joining us
for this voyage.
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Re. 'We-in-our-ache-shun' (reincarnation)... A Leasing Static/Poetikmi
9th Nov 2016 1:50pm
dearest Poe and luscious Malady this is a pure erotic Masterpiece..
love Crim
love Crim
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Anonymous
- Edited 9th Nov 2016 3:13pm
9th Nov 2016 3:12pm
There you are, I am
so glad to see you
my ladyloves!
thank you for the sexy
name lol, I like that.
muwah we endlessly
appreciate your presence
so glad to see you
my ladyloves!
thank you for the sexy
name lol, I like that.
muwah we endlessly
appreciate your presence
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Re: Re. 'We-in-our-ache-shun' (reincarnation)... A Leasing Static/Poet
9th Nov 2016 6:34pm
Aaaawwww the 'Crim de la Creme' has spilled her sweetness all over us... I like it lol... We thank you lady, always n forever :)
Re. 'We-in-our-ache-shun' (reincarnation)... A Leasing Static/Poetikmi
1st Jan 2017 1:12am
This is some very dope ink! Sensual romance with a hit of a erotica... I really dig this! You guys didn't fail to deliver at all!
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Re: Re. 'We-in-our-ache-shun' (reincarnation)... A Leasing Static/Poet
1st Jan 2017 1:40pm
Wow...Technically speaking, this is my first comment of the new year! lol
Yo thanks a bunch for your thoughts bro. The two of us are truly grateful :)
N Happy New Year to you bro! :)
Yo thanks a bunch for your thoughts bro. The two of us are truly grateful :)
N Happy New Year to you bro! :)