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Validation relation
Tighten the screws before he lets loose,
Threaten my muse with nothing to lose,
Raw like his emotion though all he is promoting
Is that his devotion is a crazy notion,
Something impossible to bottle,
Trying to live on full throttle like god - is that so awful?
I see him trying to prove why a status move
wouldn't go so smooth, but I've got news,
I'm stubborn and vocal and just a little hopeful,
I remain focal you complete my total....
((I wanted to keep going with this but I got blocked after total... total what? Feel free to finish this!))
Threaten my muse with nothing to lose,
Raw like his emotion though all he is promoting
Is that his devotion is a crazy notion,
Something impossible to bottle,
Trying to live on full throttle like god - is that so awful?
I see him trying to prove why a status move
wouldn't go so smooth, but I've got news,
I'm stubborn and vocal and just a little hopeful,
I remain focal you complete my total....
((I wanted to keep going with this but I got blocked after total... total what? Feel free to finish this!))
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