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Validation relation

Tighten the screws before he lets loose,
Threaten my muse with nothing to lose,
Raw like his emotion though all he is promoting
Is that his devotion is a crazy notion,
Something impossible to bottle,
Trying to live on full throttle like god - is that so awful?
I see him trying to prove why a status move
wouldn't go so smooth, but I've got news,
I'm stubborn and vocal and just a little hopeful,
I remain focal you complete my total....


((I wanted to keep going with this but I got blocked after total... total what? Feel free to finish this!))
Written by LadyLaura (Eternal)
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