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Your mind and mine
**Before you read the piece below, I want to explain that this is a piece shared between myself and a friend. Writing together, in the form of a conversation. I have her/his full permission to submit his/her(does not wish for gender to be disclosed) parts in the piece. Also she/he says hello!**
-Mm= Mutemenstral,
-K= Key(my super awesome buddy!)
We take turns so try to imagine a different voice for both (K) and (Mm) and in the last stanza the voices will speak as one. We may do audio in the future.
(Mm) Feel free to make excursions into the chaos and survey the wreckage that is my brain, good luck..
(K)...And to you as well, beware and take caution! For the mind can be an unusual and often daunting landscape of human trial and error..
(Mm)...A minefield dominated by the corpses of past choices and consequences..
(K)...An eternal battlefield whose fiery soldiers burn with fleeting impulse, every synapse an explosion of action exhibiting a new form of existence within each waking moment of the external realm..
(Mm)...An incubator for ideals and ideas to assemble and align into factions amidst the propagating reactions to stimuli, spawning the sporadic static of sentience wrapped in layers of cause and effect....
(K&Mm)...Your mind and mine steadily fire in tandem, twining along, one in the same to the key of random, worming our way through the fathoms of one another's consciousness, leaving trails in our wake for the other to follow, descending into the depths dichotomy, breathing the essence of paradox. Ride...
-Mm= Mutemenstral,
-K= Key(my super awesome buddy!)
We take turns so try to imagine a different voice for both (K) and (Mm) and in the last stanza the voices will speak as one. We may do audio in the future.
(Mm) Feel free to make excursions into the chaos and survey the wreckage that is my brain, good luck..
(K)...And to you as well, beware and take caution! For the mind can be an unusual and often daunting landscape of human trial and error..
(Mm)...A minefield dominated by the corpses of past choices and consequences..
(K)...An eternal battlefield whose fiery soldiers burn with fleeting impulse, every synapse an explosion of action exhibiting a new form of existence within each waking moment of the external realm..
(Mm)...An incubator for ideals and ideas to assemble and align into factions amidst the propagating reactions to stimuli, spawning the sporadic static of sentience wrapped in layers of cause and effect....
(K&Mm)...Your mind and mine steadily fire in tandem, twining along, one in the same to the key of random, worming our way through the fathoms of one another's consciousness, leaving trails in our wake for the other to follow, descending into the depths dichotomy, breathing the essence of paradox. Ride...
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