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Hi Ho Hi Ho...
hi ho hi ho
winter sucks it sure does blow
hi ho hi ho
sleet and ice makes for slippery woe
hi ho hi ho
my dog sure goes nuts in all the snow
hi ho hi ho
I wish to stay fucked up in all it's glow
hi ho hi ho
It's off to post I now will go...
winter sucks it sure does blow
hi ho hi ho
sleet and ice makes for slippery woe
hi ho hi ho
my dog sure goes nuts in all the snow
hi ho hi ho
I wish to stay fucked up in all it's glow
hi ho hi ho
It's off to post I now will go...
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Re. Hi Ho Hi Ho...
4th Nov 2016 5:46am
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4th Nov 2016 6:17am
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4th Nov 2016 10:02am
THE ATTATCHED ANIMATION LOOKS AS IF IT WAS MADE FOR YOUR POEM,INTERESTING PIECE
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4th Nov 2016 10:13am
I'm not so good at humour, but the blasted thing kept going round and round in my head so in it went. Thanx for commenting on the pic, that's my favorite part. I actually debated on this one. Thanx for replying,
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Re. Hi Ho Hi Ho...
4th Nov 2016 11:32am
haha.. So hate the snow as well.
I live in Ohio, and it gets so freaken cold somedays.
I'll make sure to sing this on those really bad days ;-)
I live in Ohio, and it gets so freaken cold somedays.
I'll make sure to sing this on those really bad days ;-)
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4th Nov 2016 12:17pm
I live in Indiana and I despise winters wrath, oooh. The damn thing kept cracking me up so I thought it might someone else. DevilsChild I hope you have as much fun with it as I did. Thanx so much for laughing with me. Mad respect,
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Re. Hi Ho Hi Ho...
4th Nov 2016 3:29pm
i am bless to live in miami. come down here i sell you a house. hahahahahah
forever summer here buddy.
forever summer here buddy.
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4th Nov 2016 4:05pm
I know, my father lives in St. Pete. At times I am tempted however some years back we bought our retirement home. Thanx for rubbing it in lol. Thanx so much for replying, respectfully,
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Re. Hi Ho Hi Ho...
4th Nov 2016 4:30pm
What is that white stuff ??? ... ugh. I hope not to get buried too deep myself. Fun write !!
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One of these days, my white pitbull is gonna disappear NEVER to be found lol. I think snow & winter is somebody's twisted little idea of a joke! Remember, ALWAYS wear red mittens that way if you do get buried at least someone will surely see your SOS & come dig you out. Oh my gawd can you imagine, now I'm rollin again. Thanx so much jemec for sharing and commiserating. Mad respect,
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4th Nov 2016 10:57pm
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I remembered quite awhile back you had suggested to try something funny and or a story poem. The story poem I'm still working on. I've tried humour before, not so funny. I think I finally succeeded. Thanx for the advice. I'm glad I got you to laugh, inspires me to maybe try another. Mad respect and much love,
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Re. Hi Ho Hi Ho...
5th Nov 2016 1:31am
Kickass piece of poetical writing which brought me back to when I was a kid and we would make up words like "Hi Ho Hi Ho...," but we never turn the Hi Ho Hi Ho's into a poem such as this delightful one.
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5th Nov 2016 1:42am
Hey SMG, it's always a pleasure to hear from a new friend. That's what happened to, started sing songing in my damn head and wouldn't leave. Thanx so much for the beautiful compliments. It's so very much appreciated also thanx for the read. Respectfully,
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6th Nov 2016 6:18pm
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6th Nov 2016 6:52pm
I'm proud of this one. I'm not so good at humour but I think I pulled this one off lol. Thanx so much for the compliment, read and sharing a laugh with me, all are greatly appreciated. Respectfully,
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Re. Hi Ho Hi Ho...
6th Nov 2016 7:03pm
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6th Nov 2016 7:17pm
Hey Solomon, i didn't think about that, if you don't mind i'd like to use it. I'm no good with humour but i think success has finally been found lol. Thanx so much for the advice and read, both are greatly appreciated. Much respect,
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