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Through Your Eyes ~ Duet with Duende
close my eyes
and lead me away
from all this madness
take me on a journey
with your mind
through your eyes
create a landscape
where we can meet
and become you & me
listen to my voice
I can give you peace
put your worries at ease
now picture your hands
see them becoming mine
touching you as I would
sink me inside deep
down into your mind
in our secret world of sin
now imagine my hands
traveling down your body
discovering every inch
bringing you relief
from the misery of life
as our minds become one
I yearn to feel your essence
deep inside my existence
you are the need in me
I crave your cosmos
beyond flesh and bone
connecting pass distances
engross me in this world
please your possessor
give into primal instinct
moan out with me, baby
be my magic lover
free us from judgement
I will, you complete me
breathe yourself into me
my body and mind are yours
then don't hold back, let go
for we can complete this ritual
one of our unbreakable bond
and lead me away
from all this madness
take me on a journey
with your mind
through your eyes
create a landscape
where we can meet
and become you & me
listen to my voice
I can give you peace
put your worries at ease
now picture your hands
see them becoming mine
touching you as I would
sink me inside deep
down into your mind
in our secret world of sin
now imagine my hands
traveling down your body
discovering every inch
bringing you relief
from the misery of life
as our minds become one
I yearn to feel your essence
deep inside my existence
you are the need in me
I crave your cosmos
beyond flesh and bone
connecting pass distances
engross me in this world
please your possessor
give into primal instinct
moan out with me, baby
be my magic lover
free us from judgement
I will, you complete me
breathe yourself into me
my body and mind are yours
then don't hold back, let go
for we can complete this ritual
one of our unbreakable bond
Published 22nd Oct 2016
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22nd Oct 2016 2:00pm
Thank you for taking me on this wonderful journey, DC
I enjoyed every step of it... working with you was amazing!
I enjoyed every step of it... working with you was amazing!
22nd Oct 2016 2:06pm
This was so awesome to make with you. I feel very lucky to have worked with such a talent :-)
Came out perfect ^^
Came out perfect ^^
Anonymous
22nd Oct 2016 2:20pm
DC & Duende.. absolutely brilliant.. one of the best collabs i've read.. you both meshed into a single voice.. simply breathtaking..
Dave
Dave
23rd Oct 2016 12:28pm
We do make a great team ^^
So many great people on this site anymore.
I'm just happy to have a place in it :-)
So many great people on this site anymore.
I'm just happy to have a place in it :-)
Anonymous
22nd Oct 2016 2:31pm
Truly beautiful.
I love this portion-
"I yearn to feel your essence
deep inside my existence
you are the need in me "
When two brilliant writers come together...magic happens.
Great job...💓
I love this portion-
"I yearn to feel your essence
deep inside my existence
you are the need in me "
When two brilliant writers come together...magic happens.
Great job...💓
23rd Oct 2016 12:30pm
I believe we made magic a few times too, hehe ^^
Thanks my full hearted friend ^^
Me and Duende thank you :-)
Thanks my full hearted friend ^^
Me and Duende thank you :-)
22nd Oct 2016 2:43pm
DC and lovely Duende this is divinely sensual and passionate love this :)
love Crim
love Crim
23rd Oct 2016 12:32pm
I'm so happy you enjoyed Crim
It was such an honor to work with such an awesome poet as Duende.
It was such an honor to work with such an awesome poet as Duende.
22nd Oct 2016 2:44pm
23rd Oct 2016 12:34pm
That's such a great thing to hear ^^
I really enjoyed the whole idea. Duende came up with it, and it was something so new and cool.
Very much enjoyed making it with her.
Thanks for enjoying :-)
I really enjoyed the whole idea. Duende came up with it, and it was something so new and cool.
Very much enjoyed making it with her.
Thanks for enjoying :-)
Anonymous
22nd Oct 2016 3:13pm
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23rd Oct 2016 12:35pm
I'm glad to hear that.
We really wanted to flow together :-)
We thank you ^^
We really wanted to flow together :-)
We thank you ^^
