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Through Your Eyes
close my eyes
and lead me away
from all this madness
take me on a journey
with your mind
through your eyes
create a landscape
where we can meet
and become you & me
listen to my voice
i can give you peace
put your worries at ease
now picture your hands
see them becoming mine
touching you as i would
sink me inside deep
down into your mind
in our secret world of sin
now imagine my hands
traveling down your body
discovering every inch
bringing you relief
from the misery of life
as our minds become one
i yearn to feel your essence
deep inside my existence
you are the need in me
i crave your cosmos
beyond flesh and bone
connecting pass distances
engross me in this world
please your possessor
give into primal instinct
moan out with me baby
be my magical lover
free us from judgement
i will you complete me
breathe yourself into me
my body and mind are yours
then don't hold back, let go
for we can complete this ritual
one of our unbreakable bond
and lead me away
from all this madness
take me on a journey
with your mind
through your eyes
create a landscape
where we can meet
and become you & me
listen to my voice
i can give you peace
put your worries at ease
now picture your hands
see them becoming mine
touching you as i would
sink me inside deep
down into your mind
in our secret world of sin
now imagine my hands
traveling down your body
discovering every inch
bringing you relief
from the misery of life
as our minds become one
i yearn to feel your essence
deep inside my existence
you are the need in me
i crave your cosmos
beyond flesh and bone
connecting pass distances
engross me in this world
please your possessor
give into primal instinct
moan out with me baby
be my magical lover
free us from judgement
i will you complete me
breathe yourself into me
my body and mind are yours
then don't hold back, let go
for we can complete this ritual
one of our unbreakable bond
Author's Note
A Collab with DevilsChild.
https://youtu.be/Nq7XABsEKYo
https://youtu.be/Nq7XABsEKYo
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Re. Through Your Eyes ~ Duet with DevilsChild
22nd Oct 2016 2:09pm
I wasn't sure if we would be able to ever work together. I feel so lucky to have had the chance ^^
Poem came out so perfect :-)
P.S. It feels good to be the first ;-)
Poem came out so perfect :-)
P.S. It feels good to be the first ;-)
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You make me laugh out loud with your comment!
I warned you in advance that I was a tough cookie to collab with, but we did it :-)
The poem is perfect and I am very grateful for your patience ;-)
P.S. I am happy you were my first!
I warned you in advance that I was a tough cookie to collab with, but we did it :-)
The poem is perfect and I am very grateful for your patience ;-)
P.S. I am happy you were my first!
Re. Through Your Eyes ~ Duet with DevilsChild
Anonymous
22nd Oct 2016 2:32pm
Truly beautiful.
I love this portion-
"I yearn to feel your essence
deep inside my existence
you are the need in me "
When two brilliant writers come together...magic happens.
Great job...💓
I love this portion-
"I yearn to feel your essence
deep inside my existence
you are the need in me "
When two brilliant writers come together...magic happens.
Great job...💓
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Re: Re. Through Your Eyes ~ Duet with DevilsChild
22nd Oct 2016 2:39pm
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, lovely Heart!
To call us brilliant writers and say that this poem is magic means so much to me and I know I can speak on behalf of DevilsChild!
Thank you ♥
To call us brilliant writers and say that this poem is magic means so much to me and I know I can speak on behalf of DevilsChild!
Thank you ♥
Re. Through Your Eyes ~ Duet with DevilsChild
22nd Oct 2016 2:41pm
beautiful Duende and DC you came together as one and created pure sensual magic :)
love Crim
love Crim
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Re: Re. Through Your Eyes ~ Duet with DevilsChild
22nd Oct 2016 3:04pm
Thank you so much, lovely Crim!
Together as one is an amazing compliment!
We appreciate your words very much!
Love, Duende
Together as one is an amazing compliment!
We appreciate your words very much!
Love, Duende
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Anonymous
22nd Oct 2016 3:30pm
Duende.. you and DC wrote a brilliant write.. two voices meshed as one.. a truly beautiful collab.. i loved it.
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. Through Your Eyes ~ Duet with DevilsChild
22nd Oct 2016 4:37pm
Thank you so much for your comment, Dave!
Two voices meshed as one > that's a beautiful thing to say!
Great to hear you love it :-)
Two voices meshed as one > that's a beautiful thing to say!
Great to hear you love it :-)
Re. Through Your Eyes ~ Duet with DevilsChild
22nd Oct 2016 11:48pm
Such a beautiful collaboration of minds,poetry that speaks of enduring emotion and the oneness of a connection unlike any other.
Wonderful verses,touching artwork....
Wonderful verses,touching artwork....
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Re: Re. Through Your Eyes ~ Duet with DevilsChild
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, Kasai!
Creating oneness of a true connection was what we were aiming for, I'm so glad to hear you could feel that!
Your words are really appreciated!
Creating oneness of a true connection was what we were aiming for, I'm so glad to hear you could feel that!
Your words are really appreciated!
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Anonymous
23rd Oct 2016 3:16am
Wowzers!!!! Duende & DevilsChild.........this is a perfect collab.......very sensual thru out.......tipping my pen in respect and admiration to both of you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Through Your Eyes ~ Duet with DevilsChild
Thank you so much for your enthusiastic comment, flowergirl!
Calling this a perfect collab is such a beautiful compliment... we can't ask for more!!!
Your words are really appreciated :-)
Love, Duende
Calling this a perfect collab is such a beautiful compliment... we can't ask for more!!!
Your words are really appreciated :-)
Love, Duende
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23rd Oct 2016 11:30am
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Re: Re. Through Your Eyes ~ Duet with DevilsChild
Thank you so much, Boian!
Always nice to see you on my page :-)
Great to hear you think our poem is sexy and that you love the picture!
Always nice to see you on my page :-)
Great to hear you think our poem is sexy and that you love the picture!
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Anonymous
23rd Oct 2016 7:09pm
Beautifully done, both of you! A yearning write, this one. :)
Willow
Willow
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Re: Re. Through Your Eyes ~ Duet with DevilsChild
24th Oct 2016 1:28am
Thank you so much, Willow!
Glad to hear you enjoyed this one!
We both really appreciate you comment :-)
Glad to hear you enjoyed this one!
We both really appreciate you comment :-)
Re. Through Your Eyes ~ Duet with DevilsChild
23rd Oct 2016 9:46pm
May the bond remain unbroken. Fine work from you both
I will, you complete me
breathe yourself into me
my body and mind are yours
then don't hold back, let go
for we can complete this ritual
one of our unbreakable bond
Can't beat that for compatibility nor this for inspired work, a fine collab. A joy to read, Duende and DevilsChild.
I will, you complete me
breathe yourself into me
my body and mind are yours
then don't hold back, let go
for we can complete this ritual
one of our unbreakable bond
Can't beat that for compatibility nor this for inspired work, a fine collab. A joy to read, Duende and DevilsChild.
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Re: Re. Through Your Eyes ~ Duet with DevilsChild
Glad to hear to hear it was a joy to read :-)
"May the bond remain ubroken" > that's such a lovely thing to say!
We both really appreciate your comment, Crowfly!
"May the bond remain ubroken" > that's such a lovely thing to say!
We both really appreciate your comment, Crowfly!
Re. Through Your Eyes ~ Duet with DevilsChild
24th Oct 2016 5:04am
This collaboration comes off strong and I love the interesting points of view within this piece. A great piece from start to finish.
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Re: Re. Through Your Eyes ~ Duet with DevilsChild
24th Oct 2016 7:45am
Glad to hear you love the point of view (that's what started this poem) and that you think it's a great piece from start to finish!
We really appreciate your comment!
Thank you, Eswaller
We really appreciate your comment!
Thank you, Eswaller
Re. Through Your Eyes ~ Duet with DevilsChild
24th Oct 2016 6:45am
Duende and DevilsC, you both blended beautifully. :)
Your pens seemed to waltz effortlessly together.
Pen Respect~
Your pens seemed to waltz effortlessly together.
Pen Respect~
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Re: Re. Through Your Eyes ~ Duet with DevilsChild
24th Oct 2016 7:49am
Thank you so much for your comment, dear Rain!
That we blended beautifully is an amazing compliment, we both thank you very much!
That we blended beautifully is an amazing compliment, we both thank you very much!
Re. Through Your Eyes ~ Duet with DevilsChild
20th Nov 2016 6:13pm
Re: Re. Through Your Eyes ~ Duet with DevilsChild
21st Nov 2016 2:34pm
Thank you so much for your comment!
We really enjoyed writing this one, glad to hear you love it!
Much appreciated Mr.
We really enjoyed writing this one, glad to hear you love it!
Much appreciated Mr.
Re. Through Your Eyes ~ Duet with DevilsChild
20th Nov 2016 7:09pm
The deepest connection that two people can have. Such a rare gem in life. Only few can experience such euphoria.
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Re: Re. Through Your Eyes ~ Duet with DevilsChild
21st Nov 2016 2:35pm
Wow... that's such a beautiful thing to say! You left me a bit speechless...
We both really appreciate your comment!
We both really appreciate your comment!
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21st Nov 2016 10:50pm
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22nd Nov 2016 4:49pm
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