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Offended
Never my intention to offend
I read your beautiful prose,
You dare let me in.......
......and I thank you for
the brilliant mental stimulation
your words my dear,
such a great artistic creation
A simple response to
that which you wrote
a simple compliment to your prowess
feeling as now, t'was just a joke
......to you
so it's fine to me that our correspondence is through
Dearest dancer, I only wish the best for you
Respecting your "sensitivity",
slightly overdone........
........you've truly missed the mark of my intention
and now I am the one that truly feels......
....offended.
I read your beautiful prose,
You dare let me in.......
......and I thank you for
the brilliant mental stimulation
your words my dear,
such a great artistic creation
A simple response to
that which you wrote
a simple compliment to your prowess
feeling as now, t'was just a joke
......to you
so it's fine to me that our correspondence is through
Dearest dancer, I only wish the best for you
Respecting your "sensitivity",
slightly overdone........
........you've truly missed the mark of my intention
and now I am the one that truly feels......
....offended.
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