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I am a poem without a poet
I am a star on a rainy night
hidden behind the clouds
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I am the wind after a hurricane
wiping your tears yet unnoticed
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I am a vine on a barren land
searching for a tree to climb
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I am a pond next to a lake
polluted and drained
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I am a needle in a haystack
no one gives a damn about
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I am an art without a muse
empty from inside out
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I am a story without an author
waiting to be told
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I am a poem without a poet
will you write me on ?
as a submission to the comp C O N F E S S I O N S
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Re. I am a poem without a poet
20th Oct 2016 12:20pm
Re: Re. I am a poem without a poet
20th Oct 2016 7:29pm
Re. I am a poem without a poet
Anonymous
20th Oct 2016 12:25pm
Love this... 💓
The build up is great.
The build up is great.
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Re: Re. I am a poem without a poet
20th Oct 2016 7:30pm
Anonymous
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21st Oct 2016 6:49am
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Re: Re. I am a poem without a poet
21st Oct 2016 7:30am
Re. I am a poem without a poet
Anonymous
22nd Oct 2016 5:16pm
Love this.. you have an impersonation when it comes to poetry..
🎇Trish
🎇Trish
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Re: Re. I am a poem without a poet
22nd Oct 2016 9:33pm
Re. I am a poem without a poet
Anonymous
23rd Oct 2016 1:48pm
I saw this poem in my competition thread, and I'm very glad that you posted it. I love the short, gentle nature of the strophes, I think this works very well for the tone of the poem rather than having lots of lines together. The question that we are left lingering with at the end I think is a very worthy one. I like the way that you interacted with the reader there, drew us in.
Beautifully done.
Thank you for the read.
Beautifully done.
Thank you for the read.
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Re: Re. I am a poem without a poet
24th Oct 2016 2:03am
Re. I am a poem without a poet
26th Oct 2016 12:24pm
dear poem,
you don't need a poet
the poet needs you.
beautiful ponderings dejure, good luck with the comp.
you don't need a poet
the poet needs you.
beautiful ponderings dejure, good luck with the comp.
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26th Oct 2016 4:11pm
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Re. I am a poem without a poet
28th Oct 2016 4:58am
You are just amazing, so besides being in this
comp my self..
must say good luck!
-Howlings
comp my self..
must say good luck!
-Howlings
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