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Mistress of Seduction
she was a teaser
soft whisperer
mesmerised them
in a haze of colours
dressed in the
morning dew
drops on her curves
with the sweet smell
lit up the atmosphere
they crawled
some of them flew
and some climbed
to the top just to
dance in front of her
...to impress her
she watched them
closely, seductively
with half opened lips
half opened eyes
she never moved
she waited patiently
with an intense
concentration
there will be a one
brave enough to
reach to kiss her
mellow upper lip
and, they fall
for she is the
mistress of
seduction
As a submission to the comp Poetical power of the flowers
Published 10th Oct 2016
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Anonymous
10th Oct 2016 12:37pm
The first stanza sets this write....beautifully.
The imagery is so very potent, and the expression is quite alluring.
Brilliantly done 💓
The imagery is so very potent, and the expression is quite alluring.
Brilliantly done 💓
10th Oct 2016 1:29pm
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
10th Oct 2016 7:18pm
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11th Oct 2016 5:25am
Anonymous
10th Oct 2016 8:48pm
Gentle seduction is so alluring .. beautiful
✨Always peace Trish
✨Always peace Trish
11th Oct 2016 5:29am
