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II. Pranidhana
carry me across the ocean
guide me through this storm
i need your mercy to shelter me
through the endless ebb and flow
the meaning of life is long forgotten
the cross i received too heavy to bear
help me reunite my body and my soul
quiet the waves and silence my mind
will you release me and set me free
will you comfort this forsaken me
at your feet i shall lay me down
in your care i shall deliver me
your slave i will always be
in your hands i am safe
show me the course
deliver me, please
guide me home
give me peace
Author's Note
Snatam Kaur - Carry Me ♡
https://youtu.be/L2CHqmDXMtk
https://youtu.be/L2CHqmDXMtk
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Re. II. Pranidhana
8th Oct 2016 8:44pm
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9th Oct 2016 6:33am
Thank you so much, lovely Crim!
This piece was the most difficult to write, so I'm really glad you call it Soulful, because that's where the writes came from...
Love, Duende
This piece was the most difficult to write, so I'm really glad you call it Soulful, because that's where the writes came from...
Love, Duende
Re. II. Pranidhana
8th Oct 2016 8:52pm
I hope all is granted to you
as you have asked for with
such an open heart.
Keith
as you have asked for with
such an open heart.
Keith
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9th Oct 2016 6:36am
Thank you so much for your kind words, Keith!
Open heart... that moves me deeply!
Open heart... that moves me deeply!
Re. II. Pranidhana
9th Oct 2016 1:01am
Praṇidhāna....she floats upon the peaceful enlightenment of he who is free of all hindrances and karma. Seraph, pure and light, take my spirit to a higher plane. Such a beautiful and delicious meditation Duende. : )
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Thank you so much for your wise words, MrM!
Meditation? Yes, it is... maybe even a prayer...
Both songs are very important to me (and inspired the poems) but this one is as well:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q271AbL5ddU
Love, Duende
Meditation? Yes, it is... maybe even a prayer...
Both songs are very important to me (and inspired the poems) but this one is as well:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q271AbL5ddU
Love, Duende
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Re: Re. II. Pranidhana
9th Oct 2016 8:41am
Thank you so much for your comment, Aemilia!
I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it and yes... it was written as a healing piece! Never thought of it as a place of power, but I can imagine it to be... thank you for mentioning that :-)
I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it and yes... it was written as a healing piece! Never thought of it as a place of power, but I can imagine it to be... thank you for mentioning that :-)
Re. II. Pranidhana
9th Oct 2016 8:57am
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9th Oct 2016 3:34pm
Re. II. Pranidhana
9th Oct 2016 10:00am
This was amazing. I feel like i say that on every poem you write, but you blow me away every time :-)
Truly gifted you are ^^
Truly gifted you are ^^
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Re: Re. II. Pranidhana
9th Oct 2016 3:36pm
Well... you blow me away with your comments everytime :-)
Thank you so much for your words, for calling me gifted (blush) and taking her home with you... that means a lot to me!!!
Thank you so much for your words, for calling me gifted (blush) and taking her home with you... that means a lot to me!!!
Re. II. Pranidhana
9th Oct 2016 7:57pm
An amazing one
You are gifted with depth and you deliver it with charm always.
Keep it up.
You are gifted with depth and you deliver it with charm always.
Keep it up.
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Re: Re. II. Pranidhana
10th Oct 2016 10:21am
Wow... you blow me away with your amazing comment!
Gifted with depth... I can't ask for a more beautiful compliment!
Thank you so much for your visit and your words!
Gifted with depth... I can't ask for a more beautiful compliment!
Thank you so much for your visit and your words!
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10th Oct 2016 10:28am
Thank you so much for your comment, Boian!
You made me smile by highlighting those lines, because it was a little bit of a follow up on 'Deliver Me' (working on Crucify Me ;-))
You made me smile by highlighting those lines, because it was a little bit of a follow up on 'Deliver Me' (working on Crucify Me ;-))
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Thank you so much for your comment, Nemo :-)
The title was what started these poems... I took me a while to write them, but I wanted to nail both of them... I'm so glad you like them!
The title was what started these poems... I took me a while to write them, but I wanted to nail both of them... I'm so glad you like them!
Re. II. Pranidhana
17th Dec 2016 8:06am
Cannot pick a favorite line....the whole poem is beautifully bursting with so much colorful expressions....Word by word, I am mesmerized....Easy-read too....just my style!! Wonderfully done!!!
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17th Dec 2016 1:23pm
Wow... mesmerized? I'm blushing :-)
This piece (together with Ishvara, part one) means a lot to me and so do your words! Thank you so much for another amazing comment!
This piece (together with Ishvara, part one) means a lot to me and so do your words! Thank you so much for another amazing comment!